Date: 07/13/2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
The more I find out, the more I need to know. Pike was a good captain and a good man; Jim will miss his surrogate father and will have to lean the more on his friend/brother/CMO, McCoy. I can't wait to find out why Spock's floating in a vat of fluid, waiting to be auctioned off and what's so important about him that everybody else seems to know about and want? You're spinning a tale that is becoming an addiction.
Thank you! More on vat!Spock later.
Date: 07/12/2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
Amazing chapter! It was so sad that Pike died, but I'm glad that Kirk found Spock. I'm really curious about Spock being in that tank. Looking forward to the nex chapter.
Thank you for reading! More on tank!Spock later. :)
Date: 07/07/2013 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your first Trek fic? Well you're doing wonderfully well! Can't wait for the 'package' to be picked up and find out what all of the mystery is about. Love devious hacker Jim and I'm betting Pike is well aware of his First's abilities and is counting on them to get the scoop since he's obviously been ordered not to divulge anything. Really loving this and thanks for sharing!
Thanks very much! Yep, my first trek fic, but a long time trekkie.