Date: 03/06/2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
very pionet (sp?) if i weren't tied up so much with my own health and such i would say there is a real multi-chapter story behind this poem and the art.
it is, of course, up to you if you expand upon this with a story but i for one think it would be great.
Date: 07/20/2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
It is the terrible belief that Jim Will not want him that is worse than anything. How heartbreaking. You create such a powerfully evocative mood. Very artfull.
When you have such an intense image the words come easily. Thanks for reading and commenting.