Date: 11/03/2013 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 Past pleasure
Hm, it's true that this story is nothing but smut - but very good smut indeed, I have rarely read a k/s story that was so hot. My compliments :-)
Thank you I am very flattered and delighted by your comment. Thank you for taking the time to comment, it is really appreciated.
Date: 07/30/2013 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 Past pleasure
That's all you got? ;)
Moar! And make less PG next time? ;P
Seriously; Good stuff! Moar!
Ok I will share a secret, someone has suggested I missed a trick so I am writing a little addition. I expect iinto e done tonight! Let me know if it is too much! ;)
Date: 07/29/2013 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 3 Are two Spock's better than one?
LOL! Spock androids is pretty damned naughty, gotta say. I think you did a wonderful job with the hotness.
Of course, it wouldn't be me if I didn't point out some of the small things that would make this even better.
The first thing I noticed was the punctuation errors with quotations. I suggest consulting a brief quotation rule text about what goes where and why in terms of punctuation.
The other thing I noticed was, watch the para lengnth. There are the end, that first part of chapter 3--I suggest breaking that first paragraph up into 4 or 5. :)
Other than that, way to think kinky ;) <3
Very helpful and constructive as always. :)
Date: 07/28/2013 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 3 Are two Spock's better than one?
Oh, there was nothing subtle about this, at all!
I'll give it two and a half Dizzles!
Thank you, thank you, I am humbled and honoured and off to work on something with at least the hint of a plot. :)
Date: 07/28/2013 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 3 Are two Spock's better than one?
Ingenious and most enjoyable. I'm wondering how Kirk can go back to just one Spock, after experiencing such unique pleasure with two.
No indeed. I guess Spock will just have to find ways to spice things up every now and then! Thank you so much for your review. Glad you enjoyed it.