Date: 09/06/2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely! I enjoyed all the different things Spock tried- and I loved the titles to each segment.
Author's Response: I think I changed those titles at least three times before I felt like I got it right so I'm really happy you liked them. Thank you for commenting! :)
Date: 09/05/2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
You have a rare talent for writing short stories, which is not as easy as one might think. Loved this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a kind comment! I tend to doubt my short stories so I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 09/05/2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this so much...Big grin on my face. You chose Spock's words well...I could hear the actor speaking them, and the humor was delightful. Awesome job...Write more...
Author's Response: I'm so glad it worked well for you. Thank you for commenting!