Date: 03/05/2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, really amazing structure. Your plot was convincing from beginning to end, your dialogues rang true and fit the characters. Thank you very much for sharing this piece.
Thank you for the kind review. I really appreciate it. Positive feedback is wonderful. Thanks so much.
Date: 03/03/2014 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
absolutely delightful, do you happen to have any more mirrorverse plots tucked up your sleeve? maybe early mirrorverse where jim never joins starfleet (there's the rebellion, pirate, smuggler, slaver, assassin, any position of another planet). this world needs more stories like this one.
Date: 09/19/2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
One obsession that is not viewed as ma...I wonder if fanfiction would count. Interesting take on mirror verse! Your zjim was tragic and awesome in his flaws.
I really appreciate the positive response. Thanks for letting me know the story was enjoyed and the ideas worked.
Date: 09/16/2013 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was amazing! I loved the entire concept! Seriously-you did a fabulous job getting all these characters to mesh so well in the storyline. I KNEW that Stonn could not be a nice guy! And that was a great twist to the story.
WHile i have always been intrigued by the Mirror universe, I never cared for the outright hatred that the characters seemed to have. This actually gave me a better perspective and appreciation for that concept.
Please keep writing such great pieces as this! I look forward to more!
Thanks for the feedback.
I agree. The Mirror universe can get too cruel. I tried to make it harsh but not too terrible.
'Tiger by the Tail' story comes before this one, and I'm slowly working on another. Slow is the opperative word.
Thanks for letting me know the idea worked.
Date: 09/16/2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a wonderful well plotted story. It read like a murder mystery. I don't usually read mirror fics but I am so glad I got to this one. Great job.
Thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it.