Date: 09/11/2014 12:37 PM Title: (Escort)
What about Kirk's injuries like when they fell from the hovercraft line with Spock landing on top of Kirk and Kirks back supposedly being burned by pieces of debris. Plus I think you had his leg get grazed by a weapon not to mention his shoulder wound. He seems unhurt now.
Date: 09/11/2014 3:37 AM Title: (Squad in Vicinity)
Great story though I wish that the Romulan had simply shot and severed the line holding Jim and Spock causing the shuttle to have to fly away for safety - rather than killing off Spock's Mother and Pike. I do love me some Hurt!Kirk though so thank you for that :-)
Date: 08/23/2014 12:32 PM Title: (Negative)
Forgot! When I read that I had to write this review to tell you how much I am enjoying this story and am very hopeful you will continue. I love the subtle dynamic between Jim and Spock: so different from anything I've read before. So much emotional depth, and remaining puzzles, and the tension and yet connection between them is wonderfully compelling. Well done, and please...more! -C
Date: 10/13/2013 3:25 PM Title: (Squad in Vicinity)
Wow, if you think we need a pick up in action after that, I'd better install seat belts to my chair! I wonder how the breaking of his familial bond with his mother is going to affect Spock's ability to help Jim in avoiding capture by the Romulans. And though Jim's lost everything before, he doesn't have time to process it because he's still got to keep himself and Spock alive. Really great chapter, thanks for sharing!