Date: 11/17/2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am silently flailing in my living room. This gave me butterflies the entire time I was reading! My favorite part was Spock taking pleasure in the fact that Jim was seeing him out of uniform. The fact that Spock asked Jim to clarify, because he was so afraid of being wrong about what Jim was saying, was a little heartbreaking. I love the idea of Spock pining after Jim for years, content to be his friend if nothing else, but I'm so glad you gave them such a happy ending.
Thanks so much! I’m delighted to hear that the story elements you mention spoke to you as they did. Thanks for reviewing…and I hope no damage resulted from the flailing!
Date: 09/23/2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this little story. They truly are connected aren't they? Always knowing what the other one is thinking. Great read. Thanks for sharing.
It's my pleasure. This was a fun story to write, and I'm happy to know that that sense of connection comes across.
Date: 09/23/2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a perfect recognition-of-love, brink-of-first-time story. This is the Kirk and Spock I love to see: fully attuned to each other, their physical attraction rooted in friendship and love, and not to mention highly competent officers and the best damned team in Starfleet.
I'm glad you posted this here. I read and enjoyed your work back in the Dim Time, when I was reading zines, but had not seen this. It's priceless.
Thanks so much, and what a lovely description of the Kirk/Spock relationship. I'm delighted that you saw that in the story!