Date: 10/01/2013 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fascinating story. I guess you could call the surprise in the trial a sort of "reverse Perry Mason moment." Kirk's guilt, shame and grief in the beginning of the story was heartbreaking. Given the assumptions of the story, I can see why both of them thought Spock's "punishment" was needed to balance things out emotionally.
I can see your slanted eyebrows rising, Dunyazad. "Fascinating", indeed ;)
Thanks for your comment! I too believe that the "punishment" was a balancing factor, both a retribution and a pardon at the same time.
Date: 10/01/2013 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! This was a very interesting and engrossing story. The twist with the personal log and the "punishment" doled out by Spock was excellent.
I enjoyed reading a different take on how these two got together. But then again...can I even say they are together? Considering how things happened... I do not know.
Is there possibly a second chapter hiding some place in the back of your brain?
Thank you for sharing this! I always enjoy one of your stories. Keep up the great writing!
Thank you DivaPammy, once again <3
Atm I'm not planning a second chapter, but then again I didn't plan this one either :D So we'll see how it goes.
Date: 10/01/2013 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm not one for taking advantage; I believe our boys know each other well enough that they would not have to submit to such savagary. But I can see the love between them still, and that's all that matters in my world is that they love each other. I accept your story. Well written.
Author's Response: As I've mentioned, the warnings are there for a reason. Still, thanks for taking the time to read my story, I'm glad you found it acceptable if not enjoyable :)