Date: 11/19/2013 1:31 AM Title: Step 6: Run For Cover When Needed
Poor Spock is all alarmed by the sirens. I would be too, but I'm sure he's not used to something like that.
I'm finding myself hating Kirk and wanting to slap the hell out of him.
So who is your favorite person in this fic? So curious. I'm sorry.
Date: 11/17/2013 7:01 AM Title: Step 4: Understand What People Are Actually Talking About
Is this going to be a Bruce/Jim romance and an unrequited Jim/Spock fic? Because I really can't handle reading fics where Spock's in love with Jim, but Jim doesn't love him in return.
Nope. Jim loves Spock. He doesn't love Bruce. He is just temporarily confused by Bruce's confidence and weird brooding allure. Fret not. Jim is just a little slow sometimes. Anyways, Bruce will have his love...he is just going to kick and scream and complain the whole way through once he understands who it is.
Date: 11/08/2013 8:27 PM Title: Step 1: Go On A Mission
Good start on this fic! I was amused by Jim's reaction to being touched by something scaly. I'd have the same reaction. :)
Took a while to get off the ground due to some very dumb issues, but the whole first chapter...it is awesome(at least in my eyes) and I can't wait for you to read it.