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Reviewer: C E M Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2015 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: My Mind to Your Mind... My Heart to Your Heart

AH!!! THIS IS SO CUTE!!! <3 This makes me love Jim and Spock even more!! :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! I'm sorry for the very late reply. I never got a notification and hadn't known you posted this. <333

Reviewer: Kittenseal22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 3: Sacrosanctity

Well, this is something I haven't read before... and I like a heck of a lot!  The first chapter was seriously one of the hottest things I've ever read.  I love when Spock gets fucked by Jim!  Anywhoo, I sense some trouble for Jim and Spock.  I think the Ak'djura lost something more than the ability to touch and that's just incredibly sad.  I hope to read more sexy Spock and Jim time.  Oh, and I hope that you update, even though it's been awhile.  Bye.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! This story's been on hiatus for awhile. I've had so many writing projects pop up and this one kind of fell off the priority list. I do plan to write more for it in the future. I'm just not sure when that will be. >_<

Reviewer: Kittenseal22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 3: Sacrosanctity

Well, this is something I haven't read before... and I like a heck of a lot!  The first chapter was seriously one of the hottest things I've ever read.  I love when Spock gets fucked by Jim!  Anywhoo, I sense some trouble for Jim and Spock.  I think the Ak'djura lost something more than the ability to touch and that's just incredibly sad.  I hope to read more sexy Spock and Jim time.  Oh, and I hope that you update, even though it's been awhile.  Bye.

Reviewer: Four-Nostril Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2014 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: My Mind to Your Mind... My Heart to Your Heart

First - before I even start reading - let me say that I like chapter headings. It says no much more than mere numbers.

Second - some weird formatting. Like here [...Jim had a gentle touch] and here [...Look how hard]. I'm no expert, but I think that the letter after the [. . .] should not be capitalized.


But most importantly - HOT HOT HOT! WoHoo!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it!! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LovesCheese Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: My Mind to Your Mind... My Heart to Your Heart

Wow, this is brilliant! I really hope you update soon, I didn't spot it was a wip when I started reading, and am dying to find out what happens!



Author's Response:

I'm so pleased you like it!! :D I had a few K/S side fics that put this one on temporary hiatus. I'm planning to get back to it shortly. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! <3

Reviewer: museattack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 3: Sacrosanctity

I adore the worldbuilding you did in this chapter! Your descriptions are vivid. I could see and even hear people. I often forget to write sound, so the fact that you described a low voice stood out to me. The idea of another sect which split from the Romulans is great. I love the history, and the fact that the Vulcans don't even know about the Ak'djura. I will be eagerly awaiting the next part. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I'm really glad you're enjoying it!! :D Sometimes I feel like I go off on tangents and get too descriptive, so I hope my writing is well balanced in that respect.

I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review!! ^o^

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 3: Sacrosanctity

This race being a common ancestor to Vulcans is very interesting!  I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad!! When I started thinking about this plot, I knew I wanted to create some kind of telepathic race.  Telepathy itself is interesting but I wanted to give the leading characters a personal stake too. ...And what better way than throwing in some Vulcan ties?

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2013 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: Sacrosanctity

Fascinating to see J'ira's reaction to Kirk. I like the pronunciation guide -- thank you for including it.



Author's Response:

No, thank you for reviewing all chapters so far! :)

Yes, Ji'ira can't quite wrap that powerful mind of his around just why Jim is so inclined to touch... or why he can't take his eyes off of him. Curiosity drives people to strange things somtimes...

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 2: (Lack of) Contact

Nice scene-setting and build up of mystery,



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2013 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: My Mind to Your Mind... My Heart to Your Heart

I wish I could be as articulate as Akaiii about how much I enjoyed this chapter, but my enthusiasm for the smut is equally great. Loved the explicitness and the, ah, effort involved in this get-together. You know, as sexy as the scene was, it also came through very clearly that these two guys love each other.



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much for reading my story and taking the time to write a review!! I can't tell you how much I appreciate it! :D

I'm very happy that you felt this chapter makes it clear that Jim and Spock have a deep relationship. It'll be something of extreme importance in later chapters.

Reviewer: Akaiii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: My Mind to Your Mind... My Heart to Your Heart

hELLO SPOCKSHAIR FROM TUMBLR HERE AND CAN I JUST SAY I ADORE THIS

OH GOD I 'M SO OVERHELMED RN

i love the way you write smut this is just the best

i swear to surak im just---

AND BOTTOM !SPOCK AWW YEAHH UGHFUHGFHKASDSADS



Author's Response:

I honestly believe this is one of the greatest responses anyone ever gave my writing. LMAO

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! I really appreciate it. :D I'm very happy you enjoyed. <3

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: My Mind to Your Mind... My Heart to Your Heart

I'm enjoying this fic very much!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! ^_^

Reviewer: museattack Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 2: (Lack of) Contact

I'm so glad to see you're writing! Your summary sounded really interesting, and I'm curious to see where you take this and how you develop the Ak'djura culture. Your Spock and Bones banter had me grinning, and Jim and Spock were really sweet with each other. 

“Well, what if I told you that I thought you were the most captivating man in the entire universe... and that I'm incredibly proud you're mine?” 

“In that case, I would say you are very talented in the art of flattery. Sir.”

 

I loved that exchange! 



Author's Response:

I'm very flattered you read and reviewed my humble writing. I really look up to you so I'm beyond thrilled! Thank you very much!

Honestly, this is the first serious ST fic I've ever written and also the first piece of writing I've published in years. I'm going to try my best to not screw up.

Once again, thank you! :D

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