




Date: 12/18/2013 1:01 AM Title: The Banished
OH, interesting! :) A/U Christmas is fine by me! :)
Date: 12/17/2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Bargain
Jim is such a nice guy. Interesting premise.
Date: 12/17/2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Bargain
Yes, I love it, keep it going and don't worry if the number of chapters increases!
Date: 12/16/2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Bargain
Love the way you are fleshing out this "universe" and the beginning of the relationship. And the nod back to "City on the Edge" was awesome.
Date: 12/15/2013 12:57 AM Title: The Banished
Wonderful beginning. Very intriguing AU. Nice to see that Kirk seems to be as open-minded and free of preconceptions as he is in "our" universe.
Date: 12/14/2013 7:05 PM Title: The Banished
Oh a Christmas fairy tale^^ Hope to read more soon ;b
Date: 12/14/2013 6:28 PM Title: The Banished
very good! i hope there will be a lot of chapter ;)
Date: 12/14/2013 4:12 PM Title: The Banished
Very interesting so far.
Date: 12/14/2013 11:31 AM Title: The Banished
Oh wow, a WIP from my favorite author, what a wonderful Christmas present!
i love it so far, and it doesn't feel like it's a short story - feels like it might take on a life of its own and stretch over a lot of chapters (nothing wrong with a bit of not-so-subliminal suggestion, is there)?
Thank you, I can't wait to read more!





Date: 12/14/2013 2:41 AM Title: The Banished
Okay.....MORE, please!
~AKO
Date: 12/14/2013 2:40 AM Title: The Banished
Very promising, can't wait to read more!





Date: 12/14/2013 12:25 AM Title: The Banished
What an interesting premise for an AU. I look forward to seeing where you take this one. Poor Spock.