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Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2013 1:01 AM Title: The Banished

OH, interesting! :) A/U Christmas is fine by me! :) 

Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Bargain

Jim is such a nice guy. Interesting premise.

Reviewer: angelocustode Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Bargain

Yes, I love it, keep it going and don't worry if the number of chapters increases!

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Bargain

Love the way you are fleshing out this "universe" and the beginning of the relationship. And the nod back to "City on the Edge" was awesome.

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2013 12:57 AM Title: The Banished

Wonderful beginning. Very intriguing AU. Nice to see that Kirk seems to be as open-minded and free of preconceptions as he is in "our" universe.

Reviewer: Ishtar205 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2013 7:05 PM Title: The Banished

Oh a Christmas fairy tale^^ Hope to read more soon ;b

Reviewer: coccinelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2013 6:28 PM Title: The Banished

very good! i hope there will be a lot of chapter  ;)

Reviewer: Liasid Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2013 4:12 PM Title: The Banished

Very interesting so far.

Reviewer: newaunty Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2013 11:31 AM Title: The Banished

Oh wow, a WIP from my favorite author, what a wonderful Christmas present!

i love it so far, and it doesn't feel like it's a short story - feels like it might take on a life of its own and stretch over a lot of chapters (nothing wrong with a bit of not-so-subliminal suggestion, is there)?

Thank you, I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: AKO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2013 2:41 AM Title: The Banished

Okay.....MORE, please!

~AKO

Reviewer: angelocustode Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2013 2:40 AM Title: The Banished

Very promising, can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: AshayaTReldai Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2013 12:25 AM Title: The Banished

What an interesting premise for an AU. I look forward to seeing where you take this one. Poor Spock.

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