Date: 12/27/2013 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet! I love it! You do have a talent, and I reckon your training shines through as it does in the work of other authors on here, like the incomparable CMM...
Date: 12/26/2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Kirk and Spock seem fairly out of character here, but it was fun, anyway.
“I had no idea I was fucking a thesaurus,” Kirk muttered, chuckling. Gee, Kirk, have you MET Spock? :-)
"Fauna" means ANIMALS. If Sulu wants a plant, that's "flora." (The often-heard phrase "flora and fauna" means "plants and animals.")
Oh man. I feel like an idiot for that mess up. Thanks!