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Reviewer: LdyJulanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2021 3:44 AM Title: This Is Not the End

Sequel worthy

Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2014 11:53 AM Title: The Sun Must Set

I much liked this story, it has this very interesting and uncommon approach of flash backs and flash forewards which I found highly effective. It was a good read, perhaps in the end the whole affair is resolved a bit too quickly. I liked it that Jim's mother here is a strong woman and caring.

What a pity that this fic didn't get more reviews!

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2014 8:55 PM Title: O Captain My Captain

I like the way the drama and suspense in this story is building, piece by piece.

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2014 8:06 PM Title: I Can't Bear This Time

I think the way you are structuring the story, "Day 1," "Day 2" etc. is quite effective. Love the "talking heads" -- pretty realistic!

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2014 7:04 PM Title: The Sun Must Set

An exciting beginning. Well-written.

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