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Reviewer: Akaiii Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

ahhh this was very sweet! I wish you had expanded on that first part though. It would be interesting to see what and how Jim deals with stuff, but I guess it would be another story entirely ;)

I really enjoyed this one! but I think there's something wrong with the formatting, hmm.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I clearly should work with this more to turn it to one, whole story instead of two parts. I appreciate your comment very much, thanks!

Reviewer: museattack Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2014 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love stories where Spock is the one who makes the first move. I also liked that he second guessed himself. This was really sweet! Thank you for sharing it. 

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting, glad I was able to make you happy :)

Reviewer: vixis Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2014 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

the beginning seemed totally disconnected to the rest of the story unless you are expanding the story?? Good story though!

Author's Response: I see your point. I tried to establish a reason for why Jim was so tired and upset, and why Spock then saw it fit to cheer him up with a very special gift. Thank you for the criticism, I will definitely learn from it!

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed reading this very much!

Author's Response:

Yay, I'm so happy you liked it! :) Thank you!

Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ohhh, here is one Valentine fic I can love! This is beautifully tender and light, very refreshing. Thank you.

Author's Response: Aaw, thanks for those kind words :)

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