Date: 07/04/2014 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
just a small note, damnyouautocorrect changed some instances of saliva to salvia. not the first time I've seen this one, I guess it's like autocorrect's new toy. anyhoo
really like the meld scene and the turnaround, really conveys what a wrenching emotional experience it must be
I liked the metallic Enterprise avatar in Kirk's dreams, and the way Kirk interprets what the dream is telling him.
Haha. Aww, autocorrect, how you are teh scourge of the seas. Heh.
Thanks for all your feedback! And the Dune movie was a very questionable thing, I'll give you that. The books are better, I'd say. But to each their own. :D
Date: 07/04/2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I knew I would be in for a great yarn when I saw your username come up in the feed. Love the premise and what you're doing with it. Kirk as the fish out of water has been done before but the way you use this character is so skillful, I can completely relate to what Kirk is thinking and feeling and it also makes sense for who he is at the same time.
Date: 06/28/2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Now all they need is Bones to help them and they should be good. Hopefully they get an understanding between them and they find a way to get Scotty and Jim back to their own world. Please add more soon!!
Date: 06/10/2014 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Okay! This was freaking fun as hell!! You have GOT to keep going and finish this one up!
I cannot wait to see what you have up your sleeve for these guys!!
Bring it on!
Haha! Thanks! I had a hell of a good time writing it, so I'm glad it bled through in the reading of it as well!