I'm looking forward in seeing what the next chapter holds. :)
I'm really curious how this is going to unfold, hope your chapter end note is a promise!
Well-written, fast paced and interesting! Please don't wait so long before posting again.
This is a great idea. I hope you keep up with it. :)
Good beginning, your characterization feels ok and the story unfolds smoothly. Waiting for more.
You did a great job establishing why Kirk is pursuing internet dating. Looking forward to the next chapter.
OOO I love virtual dating stories!!! There is not enough of them! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I really like this so far. Great set up, and I'm looking forward to more!
This is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter.