Date: 06/14/2014 4:39 PM Title: Complete Story
What a terrific story! You really succeeded in making Jean real, believable and compelling, and retaining the essence of the Kirk character. I love her courage, her vitality, her intelligence, her ability to connect with others -- and her sexiness. I've read more girl!Kirk stories than I care to count, but this is far and away the best. Your writing is vivid, and I applaud your decision to write it in Spock's voice in the present tense. It shows Spock's growing connection with her just perfectly. And I love the ending!
Hope you'll be posting more here.
Oh, wow. I don't know what to say: I'm speechless, and definitely blushing at the moment.
Thanks so, so much for this terrific comment: definitely made more than my day! ;)