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Reviewer: angelocustode Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2014 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good story with depth and feeling. I particularly appreciated that you didn't make it a first time story for the part where Jim is taken care of by Spock. I think it needs quite some measure of familiarity to be able to console by making love, otherwise it comes out as a compensation and the wound remains.

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very good.
Intensive storys about Jims live.
They goes under my skin.

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2014 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

A wonderful Kirk character study. I like the way you show Kirk's essential goodness throughout all the struggles he has had to survive, all the losses he has endured.

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