Date: 10/11/2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 3: Sexual Healing
Hilarious exchange about getting worms! Very hot way for Spock to get his nervous system all reconnected. I'm glad McCoy got to watch. Hope you post another story soon!
Just one of those STD:s humans rarely worry about. I like McCoy to watch over our loving couple and make sure they don't get in trouble. Or rather - I like it when McCoy watches them get in trouble ;)
Date: 10/11/2014 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2: Scratching
I'm impressed with how you managed to get Spock's clothes off and Kirk prone in the door of the shuttlecraft. This looks promising.
Once I have a clear goal it's easy to get there. Those jellyfish were no accident! ;)