Date: 03/31/2015 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful story. You write Spock so well, his inner struggle, his decidedly alien way of thinking.
The moment of the almost kiss was so intense, so full of passion and power and sweet yearning. And the immense act of sacrifice it took Spock to break the moment, it makes the reader suffer with him.
Thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it! Writing Spock backing down was so difficult.. gahh so close and yet so far!
Date: 03/30/2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. The plaid shirt is so much a part of Kirk's persona in "City on the Edge of Forever," and I love what you have done with it. Looking forward to more.
Thank you so much for reading!! <333 So glad you liked it!
Date: 03/28/2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant stuff - have I read the beginning of it before, or have you just done a similar story?
Thank you so much for reading!! <3333 This piece was a rewriting of an old story I published in 2014 called Of Plaid Shirts and Whiskey. That one ended at the first chapter, but this one is going to carry on with the plot. :D