Date: 12/16/2009 9:49 PM Title: Hippo Hero
This is absolute genious! :D
I can't believe you managed to tell the story in all limerick! It's got plot and a moral and humor and heart ache (and sex! :D) and it rhymed! I'm so impressed I can't even tell you.
Although, introducing a new character, giving her a personality and making us like her is also quite a feat. Especially considering she was a hippo. (No offense intended towards hippos.)
Date: 08/29/2008 1:37 AM Title: Hippo Hero
Another fabulous limerick, where the disclaimer is as funny as the poem. Nothing I could say could possibly describe how deliciously wonderful this limerick is. I guarantee it is the only time a hippopotamus has ever been used as the catalyst for getting Kirk and Spock together! And I don’t think anyone else could write a limerick with hot sex scenes, but Jesmihr certainly does here!