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Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2016 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

excelente!!  I like this a lot, it has teeth!

Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

I can just see Jim, looking out into space, feeling lost, so lost. This poem captures his mood excellently, well done!

Author's Response:

Thanks, you got it exatly.

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2016 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

I read this twice. It's so beautiful and so very sad. Excellent work. This is exactly how Jim felt the moment Spock was gone. Such loss...

Author's Response:

Thanks--it's what I meant to convey.

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