Interesting follow up......jumping around in time. like the ending...I could picture the scenes you wrote. Took Death and rebirth to bring them together.
I loved this! I can't believe it took me this long to find it!
I think I like this. I should keep readin!
I liked how you showed that missed opportunity, in the end a happy ending. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for reviewing it.
I had not considered that both Kirk and Spock had made the same error but responded in different ways.