Date: 08/28/2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
unless you're going somewhere with it, the accident at the end seemed a little spurious, plotwise? but i quite enjoyed this. well done! selik's voice was particularly authentic.
I'm not absolutely sure yet. I just had a vision of Jim running down the hospital corridor to Spock, and this accident finally making up his mind for him, that he had to brave starting a relationship with Spock... Thanks about the Prime Spock compliment!
Date: 08/25/2016 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please write more. I want to know what happens to Spock. I can make up what I think but would love to know how you would proceed with telling your version for more of this story, maybe add in the part as well with them helping Selik Jr understand who his other father is. Oh and I do love this story as is but still would love more.
If anything does occur to me, I will write it! Thanks for thinking this out so much.