Date: 10/06/2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
A bit confusing, trying to tell whom from whom, but then I think I like it all mixed up! Come to think of it, Spock/Spock!Prime/Kirk/Kirk!Prime could be pretty hot... ;-)
Thank you, my friend! I might try to clarify a little, you're not the only person to say that. But I agree—that foursome would be LOVELY. I've *never* imagined it before.... ::coughcough::
Date: 10/05/2016 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet. I'm happy that you wrote a epilogue. Sometimes I was a little confused, if it was Spock or old Spock,Jim or old Jim...
(sorry my english is not sooooo good.)
Thank you so much! (And your English is great!) Yeah, that's a bit of a problem—I may go back in and try to make it clearer. Thanks so much for the comment!