Date: 04/20/2013 3:02 PM Title: None
this bit blew my mind in its perfect summation:
"The crew was accustomed to the way Kirk often focused all his attention on his second-in-command, not only on the bridge but just about everywhere else as well, like a laser beam locked on target. And the crew was accustomed to Mister Spock following the captain around like a gosling mistakenly imprinted on a duck."
Yes!! Exactly this!
I really love the way you write these guys -- so delightfully in character!
Date: 04/27/2010 9:18 PM Title: None
God, this ff almost made me topple over with laughter! Even my boyfriend liked it, and he normally detests k/s :-) We were making honking noises for days! "Like a gosling mistakingly imprinted on a duck..." where do you get these ideas?!
Date: 05/30/2009 6:30 PM Title: None
I really liked the more playful tone you took in this piece, that's how most of my writing ends up, I am incapable of being serious :) I did read Sharing the Sunlight, I even tried to review, but it was before I started an account so it would have been a regular e-mail. I really liked that story I didn't make the connection until you just mentioned it. Thank you for posting your great stories and also for replying to my reviews, I am glad they aren't sitting unread in a dead e-mail box somewhere!