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Date: 04/17/2017 4:45 PM Title: Desert

I had a hard time writing Pon Farr too. :-)



Author's Response:

Thank Primus. I never write sex. Not unless if it has to do with the plot. I am glad I am not the only one.

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Date: 04/17/2017 3:18 AM Title: Old and married

So that's it. I wish it could have lasted longer



Author's Response:

Orly? All right, time for that deleted storyline to be uploaded hre. It has Spirk. And it's completed. :)

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Date: 04/17/2017 3:13 AM Title: Party

Spock in Pon Farr on an away mission

I'd love to see how this works out



Author's Response:

Fortunetly, that does not get shown completely as I am terrible at writing Spock and Jim at Pon Farr together. I suck at writing sex in general. Llike over stimulating them, I have to be sure that it is logical and that its reasonable and that it makes sense and that it can happen during sex and it is reasonable positon and whose hand goes where---You get it, right? Sex is not my strong suit. Thank you for reading the story. ^.^ Dif-tor heh smusma

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Date: 04/12/2017 10:02 PM Title: Mountain

Lmfao!!!! Red shirts!!!!!!!!

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Date: 04/11/2017 9:20 PM Title: Forest

OH MY GOD!! I did watch Twilight and I'm still in physical therapy to rebuild my liquefied brain!!



Author's Response:

Tushah nash-veh k'du.

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Date: 04/11/2017 3:04 AM Title: Forest

Lmfao!!!!!! These guys watching Twilight!!



Author's Response:

It was mandatory that I poke fun at twilight. it's awful. Have you read the books? Or seen scenes from the movie? You probably know what I mean. The Lost Boys is superior to that. . . disgrace. . . like ewww. So disgraceful making the Vampires sparkly. Anyway, I hope you liked reading this chapter and that you sometime decide to pick up where you left off and finish reading the story <3 This story is meant to be heartwarming, funny, and . . . Spones arguments. Thanks for reading! Dif-tor heh smusma ^.^

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Date: 04/11/2017 2:52 AM Title: Desert

This was sweet!



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3 This entire story is aimed to be sweet. You'll catch a lot of it! :)

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