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Reviewer: LSPINGLES Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2020 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well I realize it has been 3 years since you started this WIP.  But what I read of it, has me wishing you would pick up the pen again.  If not to finish this story, to write another.  Both characters were so true to themselves.

Reviewer: trekkie1701 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2017 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

I know that it was dubious at first but towards the end it was really hot and meaningful in a way for them. I hope that there will be an update to this for the emotional aftermath of the events and that the link they have isn't as temporary as Spock thinks it is. Thank you for posting! =)

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :) There will be more (I couldn't just leave things like that!); I'm just having trouble finding the time for writing/editing at the moment.

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2017 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this is intense!  Great work on this.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: hortababy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2017 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed the first chapter. Looking forward to see how their relationship evolves.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! (And apologies for the slow reply.) There will be more; I just wish I had more spare time!

Reviewer: WeirdLittleStories Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2017 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice beginning!  This feels more realistic than hearts-and-flowers to me, and I like what you're doing here.


Author's Response:

Thank you so much! And yes - it's not that I don't enjoy reading such stories, but I do find it a little hard to imagine the 'emergency pon farr' scenario being a romantic experience... at least in the absence of a prior relationship.

Reviewer: urmeli2007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2017 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, pon farr again! But this time really really good and so different. Great!

Thank you. I Hope for more

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this! I've read a lot of pon farr stories, but I wanted to try something a bit different, and grittier. There is more written, which I hope to get into shape for posting sooner rather than later.

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