Date: 09/28/2013 8:40 PM Title: None
This was lovely. You do McCoy POV so well. And I love how Jim and Spock sound just like themselves. Well, that's a stupid-sounding comment, but you know what I mean. I think this is one of the most realistic portrayals I may have read about how the two of them would have found themselves turning into lovers.
Date: 09/25/2013 8:30 AM Title: None
I signed up for this archive just so I could review this. I know it has been said already but I have to repeat that McCoy keeps the story balancing between the dramatic, the sweet and the comedic in a perfect way. His arousal also contributed to the overall hotness.
Date: 02/23/2013 11:38 AM Title: None
I loved this because it was told from a third party's POV, so even though we saw an incredibly romantic moment between captain and commander, it wasn't overly saccharine because McCoy kept us grounded. i really liked how you developed his voice. Would definitely red this again!
Date: 12/12/2011 11:57 PM Title: None
Can't believe that I havent reviewed this fic as it is my all time favourite. THe fic for rainy days always guaranteed to put a smile/smirk on my face just thinking about it. Just imagining if K/S hit the deck AND then saw Dr McCoy at the height of passion......
Love this fic to bits
Date: 06/15/2011 12:33 PM Title: None
Wow. This is wonderful! I realize I'm pretty much leaving a review a day at the moment but I just love your fics and I'm devouring them at an alarming rate (alarming because what will I do when I've finished them all?)
I love McCoy's voice in this one. Gives a whole new perspective to the "McCoy Knows" meme as well! And I laughed out loud at this line: "But our Vulcan, I mean Jim’s Vulcan, he’s a stickler for details and routines, so he comes by every Tuesday, oh-nine-hundred, and I let him know how the tampon inventory is goin’. That usually turns him around and gets him out the door in a hurry."
And when Spock says, "T'hy'la, you are my life".... I just melted.
Really funny and touching. Another favourite.
LOL! I don't mind a review a day! Thanks for leaving the comments, really. Not everybody enjoys humor in their K/S, plus it's devilishly hard to write, so I'm always especially happy when someone likes one of the humorous stories. I think perhaps Down and Out and Under the Table is the most successful of those I tried to write with a light touch. I've always had a fondness for McCoy, and one day I was drying dishes and this image came to me of him under a table.... How could I resist writing it? Hah!
Again, thanks so much for your feedback. So nice of you!
Date: 10/24/2010 5:47 AM Title: None
Please note that I laughed myself silly in the middle of the night when I read it. Bones cracked me up. The following statements is just the last I found hilarious.
"Don’t know what that Vulcan word that Spock used means, but betcha it’s a love word. If Vulcans have any love words, that is. Maybe it means “your circuitry is admirable.”
Date: 04/18/2008 9:07 AM Title: None
Thanks, Jenna - wonderful story! It is tender and sexy at the same time, and that 'reciprocal episodes of intercourse' scene is just perfect. I like the story being written from McCoy's pov, and it has a fine and spot-on kind of humor to it.
Date: 03/26/2008 4:49 PM Title: None
What a gem! I was hoping that you would post something for K/S day so I kept checking in. Fun characterization of McCoy. Love the scene where Spock had had enough of the foreplay and was ready to "initiate reciprocal episodes of intercourse". I am a big fan of your writing because of your great talent for setting the mood and the "right on" dialogue. You did not disappoint! How soon before we can get some more?