Date: 10/04/2013 3:54 PM Title: ----
I read this two times, slowly, drawing out my pleasure and taking in all the details. Love the minimalistic style and how you emphasize certain things by omitting them. No talk about emotions, except the most basic ones, but somehow says so much. Stark and austere, but so powerful. I would gladly read original fiction by you.
Date: 04/01/2008 10:26 AM Title: ----
Your style is so raw at times and you draw these characters with such stark lines. Yet, the reader is kept in a state of wondering what are we missing here? If we're not paying attention, we'll miss it. I'm fascinated by the mix of in-your-face writing and the deft touch present at the same time. Thanks for such a compelling story. I hope you continue writing many more stories.