Date: 03/01/2014 3:34 AM Title: None
I just discovered this and it was absolutely beautiful. The way you described the relationship was so clear and pure and wonderfully perfect. There is far too little first person fics out there, so I'm glad that this piece can showcase the talent of that.
This blew me right away.
Date: 11/24/2013 2:16 AM Title: None
Sometimes, very rarely, there are stories that I start reading hungrily and then I have to slow down. I have to slow down because I want to savour each and every word, slowly, deliberately. This is one of those stories, so beautiful, so condensed, every word right, none too much. A writing that expresses Jim's deepest, earnest, caring heart, expresses it beyond the meaning of the words. I am awestruck, this fic is a jewel!
Date: 07/03/2008 11:59 PM Title: None
Again, wonderful. I hate to sound like a pedant, but there you go - I am one. The gorgeous emotion you write for these two is so enhanced, for me, by your clean, literate prose - what a joy to find the two together like this - passion and structure, just like Kirk and Spock, if one were to reach for a sort of silly simile. :-) Regardless, thank you for writing in this fandom where I've found too little quality writing for my voracious appetite!
Date: 04/16/2008 2:46 PM Title: None
Thank you for this, Jenna. I love the way you describe emotions in the meld. I have always felt that the concept of sharing minds in love is one of the greatest assets of the K/S relationship. This is a concept that you have explored so well in your Sunshine series and that you bring to us with much passion in this story.