Date: 08/07/2014 12:49 AM Title: none
this was mind-blowing. i'm literally sitting here with pieces of my brain coloring the bedroom wall behind me. so very ic with spock, kirk, and mccoy. you're spock wasn't too logical (hahaha i know i know). you're jim wasn't too simpering. you're mccoy wasn't too thorny. most importantly, no gratuitous use of that damned t-word i'm kind of starting to get sick of. in fact, you managed to show me that they were soulmates without having to use the t-word at all. so very many blessings on you and thank you so much for sharing this!!
Date: 10/24/2010 2:58 AM Title: none
I found it most interesting to have this from Spock's point of view. I found his convoluted and, yes, rambling thoughts of the merits and fantasies of his Captain quite fascinating.
Kudos to the author for the perspective. Definitely their first time was different than I usually find. Spock is so literal and yet it is not at all a clinical description. For instance:
"In that unfinished imagining, he had wanted to run his hands over this yielding masculine roundness, where he wanted to put his cock, to take his pleasure and ride on his captain's body, feeling Jim move beneath him."
I found that statement alone incredible sexy. It would have been ridiculous coming out of anyone elses mouth. So thank you Jenna
Date: 12/16/2009 11:26 PM Title: none
Oh yes, THIS! This is wonderful! So touching and elegant and gradual, not to mention beautifully crafted! I adore your Spock voice, and the dialog rang so true for all the characters. An incredible story and a wonderful read, thank you for a most excellent experience!
Date: 10/14/2009 9:41 AM Title: none
I love Bones in this. Our favourite CMO is such a perfect counterpart to this romantic tale. And this Jim, young, energetic, strong and responsible, is easily one of the best characterizations I've read from TOS. Told in Spock's voice, it makes for a truly lovely story. Thank you!
Date: 09/14/2009 10:33 PM Title: none
This was the first Star Trek fic I read and it is still my favourite TOS story of all the ones I've read since then (and I've read a lot!) Everything is just so superb, from the build up to the character voices to the crescendo where you finally gives them what they need. I absolutely love all of your stories, and this one is just the delicious cherry on the awesome cake that is your interpretation of the Kirk/Spock relationship.
Date: 07/09/2009 12:23 AM Title: none
Amazing, absolutely amazing...thank you so much for writing this gem. To be able to write for our beloved characters is a precious gift. You are so blessed. Please continue to write your wonderful stories they give me such pleasure... Denise