Date: 06/30/2018 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed your story. I am not normally a threesome person, not because I can't imagine it working with them, I have no problem with that. I think Spock has a lot more feelings for Bones than people appreciate. It is just that 3 is an odd number and inevitably someone would be left out. I feel you capture that wonderfully here. Even someone as confident as JTK can feel a little vunerable.
I'm not usually a threesome person either, and for the same exact reason, but a friend of mine gave me the inspiration for this and it was too much to pass up. ;) Vulnerability is, at least in my opinion, both an attractive [i.e. humanizing/revealing-of-his-gentleness] and under-explored aspect of Kirk's personality, yet we see a lot of evidence in TOS of him *being* vulnerable in a lot of ways (especially in season three...). (I'm a *major* Kirk girl, can you tell? lol) He's the tough captain, yes, but he's also a total softy, which I absolutely adore about him--as I can only assume Spock [and McCoy] do too. <3 Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! :) :) :)