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Reviewer: newaunty Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2020 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was just lovely, so sad.

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2019 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for returning to writing I am just really reading your works. This is an excellent piece 

Reviewer: spock2U Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2018 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well, that was depressing! (Whut, no transcendence? Huh.) 

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2018 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey Carmina Vulcana,
thank you for changing the table of content.

In German we say: Du hast mich kalt erwischt.

Now with a Little distance:
It's great written and of cause it's sad, but clear… they meant to be together… in all ways.

Thank you.


Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2018 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is very powerfully written and so heartbreaking.

Reviewer: macywinstar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2018 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Two souls who are one.  It doesn’t surprise me that one couldn’t live without the other.  Good story and great to see you easing back into Star Trek.

Reviewer: Sera Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2018 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh my.
Please give the warning: major character death.

I dont want to read storys without that warning. I want to decide if I read it or not. My uncle died today and I didn't need that today…

Beside that - it's well written, and very sad.

Author's Response:

My deepest apologie. And condolence. The story now includes a major character death warning. I am really sorry for having caused you pain. 

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