Date: 11/25/2013 9:25 AM Title: None
Powerful and engaging. Brilliant storytelling and you name some profound truths here, like that it is often difficult to tell how bad the bad guy is or if he is just a victim himself; like that negative actions sometimes proof to have positive outcomes; like that we have to be able to face the worst in order to become free to live the best.
Date: 04/21/2013 5:46 PM Title: None
Excellent story -- so many unexpected twists! I had no idea where this one was going, but I loved the ride and of course where it ended up. The tenderness between the two was beautifully rendered; I'm truly in awe of your depiction of their love for each other.
Date: 05/28/2011 7:54 AM Title: None
REALLY AMAZING , I HAVE READ ALL YOUR STORY'S AND I HAVE TO SAY YOU HAVE A TRUE GIFT AT THEM. SO ALIVE THEY FEEL AND JUST SUCH LOVE AND BLISS I FEEL IN THERE AND YOUR WORLD. JUST WODERFUL. THANK YOU FOR THE GIFT. XOXOXOXOXOXXO
Date: 10/23/2010 10:05 PM Title: None
It is confusing what Hanek'kan hoped to achieve. Did he want them to move past fear to a union or did he hope to break them apart before they ever joined? A mystery to go unresolved, as an answer may make this tale less than it is. We always have hope love will win out over all obstacles. I do perfer happy endings.
Date: 12/03/2008 5:07 AM Title: None
Oh, man, freaking awesome. Of all the gimmicks there are out there, 'I f*cked him in the line of duty' has got to be my favorite. Nothing better than hot sex in a real story. You made the 'under the influence' Spock entirely alarming and creepy, Kirk was smart and clever and mad as hell, and even Bones had his moment. 'Do I need to shoot someone'- great stuff, well done.