Date: 04/08/2009 2:39 PM Title: Rumour Has It
What a great story! This made me snort and giggle the whole way through. How Jim can be so brilliant, and yet so clueless. . .I felt for Spock, whose control was sorely tested. Makes me hope he got his revenge on Jim in the bedroom. Hmmm...a sequel, perhaps? ;)
Thank you for your comments, Phoebe. I hope you weren't somewhere where snorting and giggling wasn't appropriate.(g) It seems even the most brilliant men can be clueless sometimes, especially when it comes to love. I have no plans to write a sequel to this story, but if you or anyone you know would like to pick up and ball and run with it, please feel free.
Date: 04/07/2009 5:42 PM Title: Rumour Has It
What an absolutely delightful and well-written story! I love the premise and the execution was superb. I loved Kirk's characterisation -- amusing and slightly mischievous. As for poor Spock, my heart went out to him and his pain in having to hold himself back! As always, a well-crafted piece from Dana that left this reader with a grin on her face at the end of it! More, please!
Thank you very much for your comments, Amanda. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and that I left you with a smile on your face. That's always nice to hear when you write comedy.(g) I understand that the archivist is in the process of putting more of my previously zine-published story onto the site, so I expect you will have your wish for more in the future.