Date: 08/05/2009 11:23 PM Title: Nature, Structure, Variation Of
Okay, I've read this story about six times now so I think I owe you a review. Obviously, I really, really like it. Love your characterization of Kirk as messy, flawed, childlike--you're really captured him.
Date: 05/25/2009 5:29 AM Title: Nature, Structure, Variation Of
This story was really well done! If I was Spock and I heard Kirk talk like that to me, I think I'd just die, haha. Bravo to Spock for maintaining at least a little control over his emotions there. XDDD
Date: 05/21/2009 8:17 AM Title: Nature, Structure, Variation Of
This is pure PWP (plot, what plot)I Written from Spock's POV, we see him struggle to understand a sexual experience in terms of logic and analysis, coming to terms with emotions he doesn't know what to do with, and accepting that where Kirk is concerned, he has little or no control. In the end he accepts of their relationship that "he’s not about to give up them, however irrational it might be." Nicely done.
Date: 05/21/2009 1:52 AM Title: Nature, Structure, Variation Of
"They’re slang on top of crass slang, linguistic destruction to a language Spock already finds mildly unappealing, but they’re still able to make him twitch, to make him move his hands up to grip Kirk’s hips and pull him (laughing, the insufferable man) closer...." *Delicious*