Date: 07/21/2009 6:27 AM Title: The Aftershock of Pon Farr
I am completely speechless. This story is the best fanfiction story I believe I have ever encountered. I couldn't find a single thing I disliked about it. And, I praise you for not once including the term "t'hy'la", as it is much too overused in writings such as this. Your wording was brilliant and had the perfect amount of humor to keep it exciting. But best of all, the entire thing was believable. I could see each and every thing described happening, and I never once questioned if something was out of character. Wonderful work, thank you so much!
Date: 06/06/2009 2:47 PM Title: The Aftershock of Pon Farr
Ah, nothing better on a morning when you're sick than some good ol' Spirk.
I really enjoyed your story, it was well in character as well as taking into account how they would act in their private lives.