You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Zzickle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

If this story is unfinished, it should be in the Works in Progress category.

Reviewer: Tassa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2009 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

wonderful moving story

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2009 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Some interesting insights here.  Needs formatting, paragraph breaks, so on -- but you've got some good bones in this thing.  Part 2 doesn't seem to be here yet, so I'll check again later.  For a first try you're off to a decent start, I'm curious to read what happens next!

Greywolf, remembering his own first fics



Author's Response:

Thanks a million, have formatted somewhat now, and will undoubtedly rehash again rather than flesh out part 2 which is floating around in my head but refuses to appear on paper

You must login (register) to review.