This is so great; thank you for posting. Is there a sequal? How fast does Jim get through the academy with a baby in tow? There are other questions but I think those 2 are enough for now :)

You bastard. How can you do this?"

"Simple. I'm evil."

This is an interesting story premise, but I can tell you right away that the pace of story telling is too for me to enjoy.  I recommend that you slow down if you really want to end up with a quality story at the end of the day rather than accumulating a certain number of quick reviews.  Take your time.  Build your scenes, your character interaction and dialoge.  That's what this story deserves. 

It was a very funny fast paced summary of the movie with a little twist. Thanks...can't wait till Jim delivers.

:O sulu/chekov how cute!

again another great chapter :) *waits patiently for next*

very nice start! :D you've got me interested, would love to read another chapter!