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Reviewer: TPren Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 9

This is so great; thank you for posting. Is there a sequal? How fast does Jim get through the academy with a baby in tow? There are other questions but I think those 2 are enough for now :)

Reviewer: Bi trekkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2013 3:08 AM Title: Prologue

Interesting

Reviewer: Maud-je10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

You bastard. How can you do this?"

"Simple. I'm evil."

 Lol, perfect

Reviewer: Romanse Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2012 9:26 PM Title: Prologue

argh...that missing word was supposed to be "fast"

Reviewer: Romanse Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2012 9:25 PM Title: Prologue

This is an interesting story premise, but I can tell you right away that the pace of story telling is too for me to enjoy.  I recommend that you slow down if you really want to end up with a quality story at the end of the day rather than accumulating a certain number of quick reviews.  Take your time.  Build your scenes, your character interaction and dialoge.  That's what this story deserves. 

Reviewer: JamesTKirk1701 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh, Yeah! I love sequels!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2009 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 9

It was a very funny fast paced summary of the movie with a little twist. Thanks...can't wait till Jim delivers.

Reviewer: GenkiShuichi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 4

great chapter :D next one sounds interesting as well! cant wait!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. Next chapter up now. Thanks for reading :D

Reviewer: GenkiShuichi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2009 9:57 PM Title: Prologue

:O sulu/chekov how cute!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it. Thanks for commenting :D

Reviewer: lobsangludd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2009 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

yay excitement, can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

YAY! I'm glad you like it. Next chap up tomorrow. Thanks for commenting :D

Reviewer: GenkiShuichi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2009 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

again another great chapter :) *waits patiently for next*



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. Thanks for commenting :D



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. Thanks for commenting :D



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. Thanks for commenting :D



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. Thanks for commenting :D

Reviewer: lobsangludd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2009 1:41 AM Title: Prologue

an interesting premise :)



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Glad you like it. Thanks for commenting :D

Reviewer: GenkiShuichi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2009 2:40 PM Title: Prologue

very nice start! :D you've got me interested, would love to read another chapter!



Author's Response:

That's  good  to  know. Thanks for reading and commenting. Next  chapter  should  be  up  tomorrow :D

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