Date: 11/12/2009 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed the story, but it feels like there is something lacking...like what Kirk feels about it the next morning?
There is also the thought process of Spock at the end. I would think he would feel somewhat shameful for having forced his Captain, let alone forcing a bonding. Just because Kirk had some fantasies about Spock doesn't mean he wanted a lifetime commitment.
I sure hope you make a sequel for the morning after. That would sure be something to see.
Thanks for sharing your story. I found it very sensual.
Date: 06/26/2009 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
You had me until the forced enjoyment. The physical, yeah I can see that as uncontrollable. Forced enjoyment? Spock's conscience would be screaming, no?
I see your point. I imagined that his conscience would have to do something like rationalize the action, since it is so highly illogical anyway, and he is assuming Kirk would be unwilling to participate normally. Therefor, in a twisted and hormone driven way he decides that he should probably influence Kirk telepathically to make him more susceptible to pleasure, so that it is not a completely horrible experience for him, and thus, he is not necesarrily harming Kirk in the process of exhausting his Pon Farr. I may deal with the guilt!Spock in a sequel. We'll have to see. ^^; Thanks for reading and reviewing though. :)