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Cover of Night by Killa Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

While waiting to learn what will come of the fal tor pan, Kirk relives memories of his destructive and secret relationship with Spock. How can he find redemption when Spock doesn't even remember him? Originally posted in 1998. Also appeared in Amazing Grace: Best of the Net.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Erotica, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12512 Read Count: 15251
[Report This] Published: 09/05/2005 Updated: 09/05/2005
Reviewer: fohatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/28/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Complete Story

I realized almost immediately that I'd read this one before, but was compelled to keep reading anyhow. I have no idea why I didn't review and favorite the first time around, but I'm correcting that terrible oversight now! Such a heavy, heavy story -- I think it required a second, closer read to fully sink in. Incredible. I won't be forgetting it anytime soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. :) Thanks for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed it.

Turning Point by Killa Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

At the end of the five year mission, Kirk and Spock go to New Orleans and explore the true meaning of decadence. Originally posted to the alt.sex.fetish.startrek newsgroup in 1995. Also appeared in T'hy'la 18.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Turning Point
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30927 Read Count: 22421
[Report This] Published: 09/05/2005 Updated: 09/05/2005
Reviewer: fohatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/16/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Complete Story

Jesus. This was incredible. By the last fourth of your story I was so captivated that I couldn't pull myself away for anything, not even to relieve my bladder! Instead I sat here glued to the screen, sweating and scrolling furiously, completely immersed in this sensational tale. The imagery! The raw, perfectly articulated emotion! A fanfiction high like none I've ever experienced before. My imagination was on fire with sensory detail! I especially loved your use of water to hint at the developing themes. These images are going to stick with me for awhile. Guh. This was really something quite special. Much, much respect!



Author's Response:

*laughing!* I think that's the first time someone ever told me that they liked something I wrote so much they gave up peeing. :) A high compliment indeed! Thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

A Small Space in Time by JackHawksmoor Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Kirk and Spock in a small space


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4102 Read Count: 19841
[Report This] Published: 09/26/2005 Updated: 09/26/2005
Reviewer: fohatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/03/2013 Title: Chapter 1: one

Oh man! What a fantastic read that was! Whew! Deliciously intimate, beautifully written — I especially loved this part:


There was a picture, he'd seen once. First looking at it, it seemed to be an old man. But after a moment, he saw that if he looked at it differently, it was a lighthouse. The picture didn't change at all, the person looking had to change, to see the lighthouse inside the man. Watching Spock, watching him fight his way back to equilibrium, Kirk felt some ominous stirrings in his subconscious, and saw the picture start to shift.


God, that was good. Even the dream sequence was on point, which is not usually so easy to pull off. So well done! A favorite, for sure!

Strong Together by UKJess Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

What also happened in New York


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17058 Read Count: 34043
[Report This] Published: 11/15/2005 Updated: 11/16/2005
Reviewer: fohatic Signed
Date: 06/16/2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

super sweet!

Tired by JackHawksmoor Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A slightly different take on a first time Kirk/Spock encounter


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5672 Read Count: 12505
[Report This] Published: 01/20/2006 Updated: 01/20/2006
Reviewer: fohatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/03/2013 Title: Chapter 1: one

Beautiful

Shall We? by Jenna Hilary Sinclair Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Movies on the Enterprise. Popcorn. Stupid crewmen. Ducks and geese. McCoy with a big secret. Humor! But after all is said and done: K/S.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15104 Read Count: 6662
[Report This] Published: 01/03/2008 Updated: 01/03/2008
Reviewer: fohatic Signed
Date: 04/20/2013 Title: Chapter 1: None

this bit blew my mind in its perfect summation:

"The crew was accustomed to the way Kirk often focused all his attention on his second-in-command, not only on the bridge but just about everywhere else as well, like a laser beam locked on target. And the crew was accustomed to Mister Spock following the captain around like a gosling mistakenly imprinted on a duck."


Yes!! Exactly this!


I really love the way you write these guys -- so delightfully in character!

Summary:

Post Deneva. Spock faces the realities of life without sight… but in the darkness he and Jim face new discoveries…


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chapel, McCoy, Original Character(s), Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, First Time, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Kirk, Hurt Spock
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Caveat lector/Choose Not to Warn
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21201 Read Count: 22144
[Report This] Published: 02/04/2008 Updated: 02/04/2008
Reviewer: fohatic Signed
Date: 07/31/2013 Title: Chapter 1: "And In the Darkness Bind You..."

Wonderful!! I was very happy to find this online after reading about it on Fanlore, in an article on a zine I was interested in. I'd always thought that "Operation: Annihilate!" was a particularly sweet episode and was excited to find that someone had expanded on the blindness theme -- very well done!



Author's Response:

wow, that is so cool!!  it's always been one of my own favourite eps, bat-science about stars notwithstanding.  the story always seemed like they left a bunch of important bits out -- so I filled 'em in!!

Glad you liked it, glad to know it got a rec over there, tres cool!!

Shelter by Leslie Fish Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Spock suffers a head injury in a shuttlecraft accident and reveals more than Kirk or McCoy expected. Originally published in the print fanzine “Warped Space” XX, October 1976. "Shelter" was the third K/S story ever published. I wrote it specifically to support the K/S faction in Trek fandom, which was coming under fire at the time.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7376 Read Count: 22010
[Report This] Published: 02/04/2008 Updated: 02/04/2008
Reviewer: fohatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/16/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Shelter

WHOA this was incredible! What a powerful piece!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked.  I hope you enjoy the sequel as well.  Best,

--Leslie <;)))><

Deep Water by Jenna Hilary Sinclair Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: All is not necessarily as it seems to be.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25945 Read Count: 19235
[Report This] Published: 06/30/2008 Updated: 06/30/2008
Reviewer: fohatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/21/2013 Title: Chapter 1: None

Excellent story -- so many unexpected twists! I had no idea where this one was going, but I loved the ride and of course where it ended up. The tenderness between the two was beautifully rendered; I'm truly in awe of your depiction of their love for each other.

Sharing the Sunlight by Jenna Sinclair Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary: Novel in a prologue and seventeen chapters
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: None
Warnings: None
Series: Sharing the Sunlight
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 170707 Read Count: 239460
[Report This] Published: 10/04/2008 Updated: 11/18/2008
Reviewer: fohatic Signed
Date: 05/28/2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four

just pausing to comment on how excellent this chapter was; guh! can't wait to read more!

Desert Heat by Gayle F Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

The first story of what became The Cosmic Fuck Series. This is a pon farr story. The first appearance of the double ridges. Probably completed in 1976. First published in The Sensuous Vulcan.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Cosmic Fuck
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4986 Read Count: 23149
[Report This] Published: 03/13/2009 Updated: 03/13/2009
Reviewer: fohatic Signed
Date: 08/01/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Desert Heat

An essential classic! I just obtained a copy of Naked Times 2, which I'm very pleased to know includes this story. That mind meld scene will never cease to amaze me!

Business as Usual by JackHawksmoor Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Several days in the life of Kirk and Spock. Includes explosions, aliens, and sex.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17930 Read Count: 22372
[Report This] Published: 04/17/2009 Updated: 04/17/2009
Reviewer: fohatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/23/2013 Title: Chapter 1: ch 1

I love the way this was resolved! Such a clean read; so in-character! I was feeling pretty bad for Spock for awhile and starting to get annoyed with Kirk's attitude, but it just made the resolution so much sweeter and plausible in its intensity. Very well done!

Communication by Jenna Hilary Sinclair Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

It takes a war with the Tholians for Kirk and Spock to start talking truthfully with each other. 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8662 Read Count: 22867
[Report This] Published: 10/31/2009 Updated: 10/31/2009
Reviewer: fohatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/18/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Man oh man. This was just TOO great! I was so emotionally invested as each raised the stakes bit by bit that I was actually breaking a sweat at times, and making all kinds of nervously excited noises as I grinned at my computer screen (something I'm not usually compelled to do). So much fun! So sweet! So perfectly K/S!

Balance by Amanda Warrington Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Spock notices his captain seems to get a thrill out of being in danger and spends months closely monitoring Kirk before approaching him about it.  Just about then, events in his life overtake him...


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Pon Farr
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27584 Read Count: 21541
[Report This] Published: 12/25/2010 Updated: 12/25/2010
Reviewer: fohatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/19/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This may be the hottest, most satisfyingly in-character s/k fanfic I've read yet! Despite the occasional typo distracting me now and then, this story flowed at an excellent pace, setting the perfect tone for the mounting tension and sweet, sweet release. Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much for your lovely feedback! I really appreciate it. ♥  I'm so happy my characterisations worked for you.  I'm so sorry, though, that those typos caused such distractions and am very happy you were able to overlook them to enjoy the story.  :-)

From the Beginning by Aelin Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

Spock is drawn to Kirk from the first time he sees him at the Academy


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29413 Read Count: 52777
[Report This] Published: 12/31/2010 Updated: 01/16/2011
Reviewer: fohatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/25/2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What a romantic, remarkably insightful story! I really loved the way you managed to weave this together with canon, drawing on subtle aspects of the characters and amplifying them in a fun and believable way. For instance, how you wrote about Spock's constant awareness of Kirk on the bridge (true!) as something he's unable to suppress, given their history in your story; or the way Spock collapses against Kirk after his head injury (how many times did we [happily] see Nimoy appear just a little too self-indulgently helpless when Kirk moved to assist him?), unavoidably reveling in the contact. So perfect! That scene in the cave was my favorite part.

You had some great lines, too -- one that made me smile was "Spock had always been more skilled at getting information out of computers than out of people..." -- perfect!

Thanks so much for this very rewarding read! So glad I found it!

At a Glance by Aelin Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 154]
Summary:

Kirk and Spock see each other for the first time when they are 15 and 17, respectively, and what happens is inevitable.  Young Kirk and Spock, but the TOS versions.

NOW COMPLETE.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Chan or underage sexuality
Series: At a Glance
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42917 Read Count: 92126
[Report This] Published: 02/24/2011 Updated: 09/03/2011
Reviewer: fohatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/26/2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I enjoyed every bit of this. Wonderful story, I was hooked from the start; you drew out the tension beautifully. It's so perfect that it has a kind of canonicity all its own. In fact, I'm convinced that in an alternate universe somewhere, Spock and Kirk will be meeting like this in an eternity of fated encounters. Thank you for being the vehicle through which this timeless tale has reached us!

The Illusion of Something More by TDazz Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 204]
Summary:

Spock's years as a cadet were the worst of his life-- he spent those years homesick, lonely, uncertain if he had made the right decision, terrified that his father would never forgive his choices. The only bright spot came from an unlikely source-- a virtual companion who would tell him anything he wanted to hear for 75 credits an hour.

Jim was too young to be on his own. He was too young to have his own apartment, too young to hold down most jobs. Certainly too young to be selling his services in the sex industry, but no harm done. None of it was real. At least, not until a homesick Vulcan looking for companionship stumbled onto the channel.

What ensued was an addictive, steamy relationship where the lines between fantasy and reality were sometimes blurred beyond recognition. Some parts were painfully real, including the distance that separated them. There was no overcoming that.

At least, not until two weeks into the Enterprise's first five-year mission, Captain Kirk recognizes his First Officer as the client he had fallen in love with when he was just a rebellious teenager. Then it was just an illusion, but now it could be something more.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: None
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Humor, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Before he was a starship captain.
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62736 Read Count: 82614
[Report This] Published: 02/13/2012 Updated: 05/07/2012
Reviewer: fohatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/13/2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

WOW -- I had to create an account just to review, but I couldn't conscionably walk away from this story without expressing my heartfelt appreciation. This was spectacular. I never would have anticipated being drawn in by such a storyline, but from the very first chapter I realized I was onto something too good to pass up. I was halfway through last night (early this morning, precisely) before my eyes became too unfocused to continue, and I begrudgingly set the laptop aside and allowed myself to go to sleep. I was back as soon as I woke up, after having incorporated elements of the story in a long dream. This story has really affected me... I love when this happens (it's kind of rare). Though the ending left me with a pang of unfulfillment, I don't suppose you could have ended it any other way and still stayed true to the special sense of desire fraught with disjunction that you've invoked here. Thank you so much for sharing this!

Graveyard Orbit by JackHawksmoor Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

The Enterprise is attacked by a telepathic horror. The consequences have far-reaching implications to Kirk and Spock's unique relationship. K/S, first published in T'hy'la 31, a 'why-Spock-goes-to-Gol' story 

 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22859 Read Count: 3649
[Report This] Published: 09/19/2012 Updated: 09/19/2012
Reviewer: fohatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/04/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm sitting here with an elevated heart rate, an ongoing stream of "Oh my God... oh my God..." running through my head as I try to reconcile my mounting awe of your storytelling abilities with the spiraling despair brought on by the fact that this story remains 'TBC.'

No, really... this is so good; this is so heartbreaking!

Oh! The stuff between Spock and McCoy was so sweet! I really loved how you wrote Spock's reluctant acceptance of their friendship in the wake of Kirk's [presumed] loss. I don't know if I've ever seen McCoy written so well, his essence articulated with such subtlety:

He walked over to Spock, who had darted over to the science console the moment they'd all got through the door. Kirk had to step over a crewman's body as he did it. McCoy was crouched beside the man, and paused in his scan to watch Kirk do it.

At times like these, Kirk had a sneaking suspicion Bones hated him a little.


Jesus. I had to pause for a moment to process how excellent that single line was.

And, oh God, this part:

Jim was kissing him with every ounce of skill, with every last drop of tender feeling he had. It was staggering, both to feel it, and to know so clearly how Jim felt as they entwined. Aroused was not the word. The sensation ached too badly, was too tender and too bright.


YES. YOU HAVE DONE IT. You have written the consummation of this unique bond as I have always wanted to read it; as I have always felt it should be. Where other stories have leaned too heavily on either the eroticism or the emotionalism of this consummation, you have struck exactly the right chord for me. The resonance is so profound! This is what I've been searching for! Everything about this scene was perfect. You are a golden god of fanfiction for writing this!!

If you have any intention of continuning this story, please do. Though something so flawless shouldn't need supplementation, I can't help but bemoan the situation these characters are left in; it's as if you've opened a new universe here—or perhaps tapped into a pre-existing one on some kind of metaphysical level that storytellers might access—and have left it in a tragic state of stasis, wherein this universe's Kirk and Spock are forever trapped in fanfictional limbo, in perpetual agony! Am I getting too flowery here? A little too invested in this story? Ugh. Too late, too late — you've pierced something too raw, too close. I'm bleeding here. And I'm loving it.