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Agony by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 301]

Now Done!!! Happy Ending here!!!!

This is in response to 'Make This Have a Happy Ending' by vicktblueeyez. The challenge goes like this:

Challenge: Make this sad prompt have a happy ending. (not my prompt, belongs to anon at the kink meme)

Difficulty: Very

Prompt: Kirk/character of anon's choice are in a relationship the whole crew knows about and accepts. Then, Kirk gets top!secret-super!classified orders from Starfleet basically forcing him to seduce a traitor/spy to get information for Starfleet. [OR Kirk's orders force him to gain trust from the traitor/spy, so Kirk is all friendly and the traitor/spy takes advantage of Kirk.] Kirk follows orders/is forced but he's horrified, disgusted, and seriously messed up mentally by the encounter. Instead of comforting him or trying to understand Kirk's side, his significant other dumps him for cheating and the crew blames/is nasty to Kirk, since they aren't privy to Starfleet’s orders. Much angst ensues!

Keyword: Redemption

I've seen many takes on this prompt, all seeming to end sad which is why I haven't read them. Sad as in a broken Kirk, a broken relationship and K/S not getting back together. Mostly because Spock never found out...or he did but it was too late (Kirk ended up with Bones). I find it interesting that so many think a happy ending cannot be done. Kirk didn't believe in no-win scenarios and he didn't settle for the impossible. Instead of thinking in the box, he not only thought outside of the box but reshaped it. Saying something couldn't be done made him want to do whatever it was, even more. Yet, many feel that this prompt can only end in one way, heartbreak and it can only be written if the characters were extremely ooc. I think that is BS. A good author can make one believe in anything. They can take something old, already done and reshape it. The challenge here is to reshape this prompt and for that, you have to have the Kirk mentality and be as equally stubborn.

Stuff I would like to see but not required:

-A groveling and tortured Spock. Tortured as in self loathing. Kirk being all "fuck u, you didn't trust me, abandoned me, don't talk to me" and Spock maybe falling to his knees crying? "I have wronged you t’hy’la in ways you/I cannot imagine. I'm so sorry." 

-Super awesome dramatic make up sex somewhere down the line is mandatory. Pretty please?

-Spock has to find out somehow. Kirk left and Spock is clearing the Captain's computer maybe? Kirk thinking his hacker skills is all that leaves the file there thinking it won't be found? Maybe Spock overhears a secret conversation from Starfleet officials? Maybe Spock and crew are on an away mission some angry person is all "I'll never forgive him for using me for information! I thought he loved me but he was only pretending to follow orders!" Spock, "What orders?" Angry person, "Oh you didn't know?"

-Big time angst. Things like K/S seeing each other from across the room. Accidental touching. Something with big time tension.

All is forgiven and it ends HAPPILY aka with Kirk/Spock together.

I hope this lets me work out some demons so I can go back to my happy stories. Here we go....

Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chapel, Chekov, McCoy, Original Character(s), Scott, Sulu, T'Pring, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Erotica, Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Make this have a happy ending
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66520 Read Count: 356588
[Report This] Published: 06/30/2011 Updated: 08/11/2011
Reviewer: Riki Signed
Date: 10/09/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Moving Day

  Great Story!!!!! I like most of your story but I love this one so much!!!!!Do you mind if I translate this one into Chinese?

Author's Response:

Feel free to do so.

No other choice by geekygirl Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 278]

This is my first k/s fanfiction story.

Kirk's first year in command wasn’t exactly going to plan.

This is going to be (hopefully) a multi-chapter story with lots of character suffering (because hurt!kirk is awesome) and maybe a little bit of fluff.

I hope you enjoy please read and review.

Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chapel, Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, First Time, Fluff, Hurt/Comfort, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Hurt Kirk, Hurt Spock, Pon Farr
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Abuse, Dubious consent, Explicit violence, Infidelity, Non-consensual sex, Rape
Series: Choices
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117653 Read Count: 255831
[Report This] Published: 03/23/2012 Updated: 11/24/2012
Reviewer: Riki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/18/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is really a great story, I have read the whole story for at least five times and recommend to many friends, this is indeed one of my favorite star trek slashs. Can I translate this story into Chinese so that more people could be able to read it? Of course I will sent you the link of the Chinese website once I start to translate. Hope to hear from you soon :)