Penname: Bree Thompson [Contact] Real name: Chris
Member Since: 09/10/2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

A+ Student. English nerd. Sci-fi and fantasy nerd. Actress, writer, artist, and secret Disney fan. Only recently discovered the K/S slash. I love happy endings, but I don't shy away from tough topics.


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Woof! by CMM Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 116]
Summary:

Now done!

 

I am (temporarily) sick of MPreg, angst, even hot sex. So I am answering Veshtaya's A Captain By Any Other Species challenge, which goes like this:

Captain Kirk has been made into a woman, a toddler, a cat, a Vulcan, and various other creatures and critters in his many adventures on KSarchive. Now, it's time for something a bit more...energetic.

Note: Romantic relationship not pre-established.

Abram-verse preferred, TOS acceptable.

CHALLENGE: James "Tomcat" Kirk has been turned into (Powers That Be, help us all) a dog. How this happens is up to you (alien technology, some weird ancient other-worldly voodoo, etc.), but it must be Spock that is forced to keep an eye out for the furry captain of the USS Enterprise. The crew can help, but they also need to try to hide his condition from the Admiralty to keep Jim from losing his Captaincy before they can reverse the change.

BONUS IF: You pick an energetic breed. Border Collies, Australian Sheepdogs, and other herding breeds would be good choices. All intelligent, most of them loving and loyal, and all of them are energetic. And mostly fluffy~!

BONUS IF: Kirk, at some point, gets too lonely at night locked in his quarters and scratches and whines at the joint-bathroom door until Spock reacts. How he does so (whether it is berating the dog or allowing him into his own room, or any other variation) is up to you.

LARGE BONUS IF: He still hops up into his chair on the bridge. C'mon, picture it - it's just adorable!

MEGA BONUS IF: He is protective of Spock in a threatening situation.

MEGA BONUS IF: Spock has no prior knowledge on how to care for a Terran canine. Kirk is thinking like a dog, not a person, and sehlats are much more intelligent than dogs.

MEGA BONUS IF: After being changed back, Jim's protectiveness of Spock and jealousy for his attention is still very obvious.

You can make this fluff and leave it at that, or continue this as a longer story that leads into a building relationship between Jim and Spock. I prefer the latter, but fluff is good too. Good luck~!

This will not be a super-long fic, probably only 3-4 chapters. And it's intentionally silly. No beastiality, I promise, although I may give into temptation and let Jim hump Cupcake's leg at some point.

Let the fur fly....


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Original Character(s), Scott, Sulu
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Fluff, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: A Captain by Any Other Species...
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12143 Read Count: 38970
[Report This] Published: 04/16/2012 Updated: 04/20/2012
Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/01/2013 Title: Chapter 5: Spock Loses a Pet, But...

Aww, this was so sweet. Afer feeding myself a steady diet of depressing angst, this was a nice, cute, fluffy change. Nice job!

If I Die by cowgirl dressage Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

This is an AU of sorts about death.  What if Spock died, not on the Enterprise, but in Sick Bay after an away mission?  This is quite sad.  Don't read if major character death is an issue.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: Major character death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1490 Read Count: 4858
[Report This] Published: 09/24/2012 Updated: 09/24/2012
Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/01/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Waaaaah. I'm sobbing. This was beautifully heartbreaking. Well done.



Author's Response:

I was hoping for that very effect!  Thank you!

I'll be Home for Christmas by CMM Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Sometimes, home isn't a place at all.

I wrote this because for the first time in my life, I am not going "home" for Christmas. As many of you know, I lost my mother earlier this year, and I am creating my own home now. This story is part of that effort. Happy holidays.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4054 Read Count: 3585
[Report This] Published: 12/18/2012 Updated: 12/18/2012
Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/27/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww. This was such a sweet story. I loved it.

Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/27/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww. This was such a sweet story. I loved it.

Injuries Are Not Forever by SpirkTrekker42 Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Spock is injured in a suicide bomber attack on Zeta III. Kirk finds him using
their bond but one of Spock's hands is severely injured. How can the Vulcan
continue to work as First Officer and Science Officer without the use of both
hands? Bones shall assist in the Vulcan's recovery as well as Kirk's TLC. K/S,
established relationship.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Amanda, Chapel, Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Character Study, Established Relationship, Fluff, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2162 Read Count: 2232
[Report This] Published: 01/07/2013 Updated: 01/18/2013
Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed
Date: 09/14/2013 Title: Chapter 2: It's Not What It Seems

Please finish this! It's really good so far.

Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed
Date: 09/14/2013 Title: Chapter 2: It's Not What It Seems

Please finish this! It's really good so far.

The Peace of Gol by cowgirl dressage Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Spock makes an important decision at Gol


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 782 Read Count: 742
[Report This] Published: 06/29/2013 Updated: 06/29/2013
Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/01/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Have you ever heard the song Echo by Jason Walker? I think it fits this story perfectly.

You handled this wonderfully, as usual.



Author's Response:

I haven't heard of the song, but I will look it up!  Thanks!

Violated by ginamc Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

After Kirk is kidnapped and tortured during an away mission, Spock and Uhura become his caretakers, nursing him back to health. But Kirk’s captivity brings disturbing memories of his past boiling to the surface and the three face the challenge of caring for the psychological wounds as well as the physical ones.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, McCoy, Original Character(s), Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other, Polyamorous
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Established Relationship, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock, Hurt Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Abuse, Chan or underage sexuality, Explicit violence, Incest, Non-consensual sex, Rape
Series: Moving On Series
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44019 Read Count: 33071
[Report This] Published: 07/10/2013 Updated: 09/15/2013
Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/24/2013 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

Keep makng stories, please. These are fantastic.

Reach for the Stars by Valkyrie Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

What if the Eugenics Wars were actually the Mutant Revolution of X-Men: The Last Stand?  What if the human governments had forced the mutant "cure" upon the global population, effectively silencing the X-gene?

Earth of the 23rd Century:  After being supposedly irrevocably suppressed back in the 21st Century, the X-gene has started reappearing, with isolated cases popping up all over the place.  A school is built in the middle of nowhere, in the rugged Australian outback – a school for these new “mutants”, Homo superior, far from civilisation to protect innocent bystanders from getting hurt by adolescents that aren’t quite in control of their powers yet.

Taking inspiration from the X-Men franchise, Sky High, Zoom Academy, Maximum Ride, AuroraMoon’s challenge, "Western Skies" by Anrui Ukimi on ff.net, and my own superhero fantasies, I give you…

Reach for the Stars

 

First in a response to AuroraMoon's challenge " If you like superheroes and or university fics, come here. "

http://ksarchive.com/modules/challenges/challenges.php?chalid=229

This will not be your ordinary academy!fic, nor even highschool!fic.  It will start out small.  But the fate of the world will rest in their hands.

Inspirational playlist now up in the story notes.  Much awesomeness is to be beheld.

 

***UPDATE***

RFTS WILL BE UNDERGOING A REVAMP

I WILL LEAVE THIS ORIGINAL TEXT UP FOR REFERENCE OF THOSE WHO WANT TO NOTE THE CHANGES, BUT WILL BE POSTING THE REVAMPED VERSION AS A NEW STORY

CHANGES ARE COMING

THE UNIVERSE WILL BE EXPANDED

AND I WILL MAKE GOOD ON MY PROMISE TO FINISH THIS GODDAMN FIC

(I may have to remove the ridiculousness of Easter tho, omfg)

 

 

Why yes, I do keep changing the description.  Thankyou for noticing.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Amanda, Chapel, Chekov, Chris Pike, Gaila, McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe, AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: If you like superheroes and or university fics, come here.
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54379 Read Count: 7825
[Report This] Published: 07/18/2013 Updated: 12/15/2014
Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed
Date: 09/25/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Only Logical

Hee. I love this scene. The whole thing between Sarek and Amanda. Logical. Suuure it was. Thanks for this. Not many people do Sarek/Amanda stuff. :)



Author's Response:

Hmmm, I may do some flashbacks then, just for the readers :D

Just keep reading, and you'll understand why flashbacks are necessary :P

Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/25/2013 Title: Chapter 2: The Best of Times and the Worst

Oh, wow. Kinda reminds meof someof the stuff in my own life. Very well-written, relatable characters. I love superhero stuff and X-men especially. Excellent so far. Story is tight, well-paced, and relatable. So cool.



Author's Response:

Thankyou for all your reviews!  I make an effort to reply to each and every one, so since you've spammed my inbox with reviews, I shall now spam your inbox with replies! ;)

I am thrilled that you think my characters are great so far.  And I love the superhero stuff too, thus this fic X)

Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/25/2013 Title: Chapter 4: Stars of Their Own

This is so cool! You're taking all my favorite characters and givng them SUPERPOWERS that match them perfectly! I am lovin' this. Also, just one teensy thing, far as it goes. We Americans say "Mom" instead of "Mum". Other than that, this is perfect.



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah, I took AuroraMoon's challenge, and tweaked it a bit in terms of what powers I think they should have.  I mean, Spock has mind powers normally, so my super!Spock has advanced telekinetics :D

pfft, we're in Australia at the moment.  Jim has adopted our culture of spelling and stuff X)  At least, that's my excuse ;)

Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/25/2013 Title: Chapter 5: Starfleet Academy for New Humans

Oh, s***. Magneto? Khan? Oh, my word, I can't wait. Also I love the way you took stuff from the 09 movie. That scene with Kirk and Uhura: perfect. Can't wait to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

No, not Magneto

If you don't want spoilers, don't read the other reviews.  Some reviewers have guessed, others I've let slip.  

Yeah, I hope to incorporate more scenes in future chapters ;)

Glad you're liking it so far!

Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/25/2013 Title: Chapter 6: The Desert Grows Cold at Night

Still excited! Really itching for next chapter. My favorite part is how pure the characters are, how absolutely right they are. Keep this up!



Author's Response:

I am still replying to EVERY SINGLE REVIEW.  Hello there :)

Ah, it is really gratifying to know that my characters are in keeping with the originals :D  I shall endeavour to keep them pure!  But they're going to have a little bit of a tragedy soon, so... yeah.  We'll see how my characterisation holds up through that ;)

Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/25/2013 Title: Chapter 8: One Hell of a Weekend: Part Two - Kaiidth

Finally caught up, and this is a wonderful story. I've come away from this with a smile on my face.

Don't worry,the bits with accent transliteration were great. Disliked the new style at first, but then I loved it. Your relationship building through the story is very well-timed.

I am itching to find out more about the villain. I've figured out by now that it isn't Magneto, but that leaves so many things open.

Again, perfectly paced, loved the additional songs, and your character renditions are spot-on perfect.

One more tiny thing: Amricans say "hey" instead of "oi". Just chuckin' that out there, for what it's worth. 

Loving the story. Keep this up! (BTW, if you want an American southerner to revew or beta anything, let me know. I'd be happy to lend a hand.)



Author's Response:

And I've finally caught up with your wonderful reviews!  I've come away from them with a smile on my face too ;)

Yay.  I am so glad you like it.  Means that i'm doing something right! :D

Oh, he'll have his big reveal.  Right now, he's plotting.  Mwahaha ;D

Thankyou for all your reviews.  You have made me feel so loved :)

Wait, southerner?  Like Bones?  If so, can you pleeeeeeeaaassse give me some slang/metaphors/sayings from your area?  That'd help with Bones' dialogue a lot :D

And thanks to your loyal reviewing, you have now earned yourself the right to your own OC!  You remember Marlie from the last chapter?  That's one of them.  I was planning on having a bunch of OC's act as redshirts, but I may keep a few for stage two of the story ;D   I'll need age, gender, name, power (if any, otherwise major trait/specialty), and species.

WARNING:  ALL OC's WILL DIE UNLESS I LIKE THEM A LOT.  :D

Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed
Date: 09/27/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Only Logical

May I just repeat what Arcadii said? All of it? It expresses my feelings about this story and thes characters and this situation perfectly. Thanks again for sticking Lily in there. I can't wait to see what happens to all these OC's. I dunno about anyone else, but I've pretty much given mine a horrible life up until your story. So thank you. :) <3



Author's Response:

D'awww, you're welcome.  I'll make sure Lily is happy before she dies :D  I treat all of my OC's well... until they fulfil their ultimate fate of being cannon fodder, but that's another kettle of fish entirely.  I'll give her a good home :)

Maybe I'll trap them all in a room together, and they can exchange some heartwrenching final words over some comm unit with the main characters.  That way, they won't die alone.  :)

Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/11/2013 Title: Reach for the Stars

O.o. I'll leave a real review when the rest of it's up.



Author's Response:

I'm guessing you liked?  :)

I can still change the speech, if you have any suggestions.  The chapter is still a work in progress ;)

Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/11/2013 Title: Reach for the Stars

Oh, I definitely enjoyed it. I have no suggestions for the speech. It's perfect. Would you mind helping me out with a fic I'm writing? If you're busy or whatever I totally understand, but I could use a beta reader. No pressure, just wondering if you're interested.

Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/25/2013 Title: Chapter 9: One Hell of a Weekend: Part Three - The Dawn of a New Day

This was amazing. Lots of nice fluffy bits. I really enjoyed the Spock parts. Also the way you expanded on his feelings, the class's dynamic, and the characters. The way you do your research just gives it that nice little touch of realism. I love how you integrated the French phrases into the beginning. The French version of "Motherf***er" ... Priceless.

I'm really looking forward to seeing where you're going with Carolyn. You have a great knack for making characters multi-layered and 3-dimensional, with just a few paragraphs. Also, the way you introduced Lily was more than I could ever have hoped for. Thank you again! The way you did it made it seem like a sibling-esque relationship, which I think is awesome. The way you've written in these characters makes me want to read each of their own stories.

Keep writing!



Author's Response:

Sorry for taking so long to reply to this "^^

I'm glad you liked the fluff.  Fluff is going to transform into angst soon, if I can write it right.  But fluff just kinda keeps happening.  I'm not in control, my characters are.  <-- Which explains the French swears.  XD

Yay, I succeeded in three dimensions!  I'm making good old John Harrison very three-dimensional as well - Actual character development!  And if things work out the way I want, actual character development over three stories.  Well, technically two.  Cos he won't turn up in the 2nd one.  But hey.  Character development.

Which reminds me, I need to turn broken!Spock into can-get-group-hugged-by-seven-young-adults-and-not-freak-out!Spock.

I hope chapter 10 will be out by Christmas, but no promises ;)

Keep reading!

---Valkyrie out---

Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/26/2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 excerpts

:D If it ever gets finished, this chapter is looking just as riveting as all your others!

Summary:

"I am Lieutenant Commander Spock, First Officer aboard the U.S.S. Enterprise. You are...our Captain, James T. Kirk."

Jim snorted. "Captain my ass. Good one, though, 'Commander Spock'. Now can you tell me what I did to piss Starfleet off this badly?"

Spock's expression fell, almost like someone had kicked his favorite puppy. Weird reaction for a Vulcan, isn't it? What's up with this guy?

"You do not remember."

Post STID AU in which Jim doesn't remember Spock, the crew, or the Enterprise when he wakes up. A journey through space to boldy find what has been lost...in this case, James T. Kirk's memory. Rated teen for now, but slash will happen. Mwahaha.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: ST:XI Abrams Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8924 Read Count: 6847
[Report This] Published: 08/06/2013 Updated: 09/09/2013
Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/25/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue-y

Please finish this. This is such a cool story, and I love what yo doing with the characters. Can't wait to see hat happens when amnesia!Jim sits in the chair, Chaos, maybe? >:) Looking forward to it. And please, if it's not too much trouble, wouod you mind giving us more Chekov? He is so cute!