Penname: Hakka [Contact] Real name: Alessandra
Member Since: 02/09/2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I still prefer to post to Livejournal (we're a dying breed), so if you feel like it just drop by: you'll be awarded with manips, which actually are more than my published fanfictions. :D


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Small Packages by T Jonesy Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

It's Spock's birthday, and Kirk has found the perfect gift -- but when he makes a wager on it with McCoy, extreme silliness ensues. Originally posted in 2002.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24776 Read Count: 7244
[Report This] Published: 09/06/2005 Updated: 09/06/2005
Reviewer: Hakka Signed
Date: 02/24/2010 Title: Chapter 1: none

Oh damn. That was sooo hilarous I probably coughed out my lungs!

Twice Upon A Time by Elise Madrid Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Once upon a time, James Kirk had to kill his best friend. Twice upon a time.....

Originally published in Legends 2, by MKASHEF Enterprises. (2002)


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Gary Mitchell
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: Major character death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34337 Read Count: 7787
[Report This] Published: 09/08/2005 Updated: 09/08/2005
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/13/2011 Title: Chapter 1: (complete)

What a wonderfully juicy AU fics, lot of potential with all those "what ifs". Good job. :)



Author's Response: Thanks! It was fun coming up with those "what ifs."

Shadow Play by Elise Madrid Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Kirk and Spock found a world where Rome never fell on Planet 892-IV. Their Mirror counterparts found one where it did. Originally published Nov 2003 in Legends 3 by MKASHEF Enterprises.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Mirror Universe
Warnings: Non-consensual sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27544 Read Count: 7232
[Report This] Published: 09/08/2005 Updated: 09/08/2005
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/12/2011 Title: Chapter 1: (complete)

I love Mirror Universe, I really do. But I am tired of reading fics where the Mirrors is used only to have the "violent, all-sex plot-what-plot with BDSM easily justified by the "evil universe" and see only the "kill the superior" view. I love it when the Universe is explored, when the characters have their own life, when they are "round" and not flat, I love it when Kirk and Spock of the Mirror Universe are drawn together for more than violent sex (hey, I love it when they're doing rough and play a bit, but after many you star getting bothered), and in a believable way, whent there's love between them, but a love different from the one their "original" counterparts share. It's not easy to find all of this in a fic, and yours is one of the few I stumbled upon so far that had.

The Mirror Universe isn't the "evilevilevil" universe many depict. "Mirror, Mirror" gave us so little to judge and depcited only few things in a white-or-black 60ies point of view, and we tend to stop at the "evilevilevil" part, but there must be something else, or the Empire would have crumbled centuries before the birth of Kirk tenth-something-grandfather. There are people ready to raise ranks, there are killings, but there is also people loyal (Farrell here) and a Captain must look at his back, fine, but not every damn second as many portay, or the Captain would either suicide or die for a breakdown. I love it that, in so little, you said so much here:

"It’s the third captain they’ve lost in as many years. The ship needs a strong hand."

So, the ships need a strong hand, and when the strong hand is there, everyone's happy. There is no "one-Captain-a-month" policy and, while people like Sulu are always there, ready to raise ranks (Kirk first of all with Pike), there are surely other people who get to respect their Captain.

Sorry, I started babble, but the Mirror Universe is especially dear to me and I get quite overwhelmed when talking about it. Well, said that, I've seen many of the things I like about the MU in your fic. Especially Kirk and Spock characterization: they're not our Jim and Spock, they are very, very different, yet they aren't simply ruthless bastards, but just people who are grown up in a different, harsher world and they have build they characters around such a harshness. But, despite everything, they can find a ray of hope, some happiness, they just need to find the right person and be motivated enough.

See, you took the MU and used it to tell a tale. A twisted, not-average, but still a tale.
And what a style, the style I like to call "old school", the one that you can find only in the old fics because nowadays... this fandom has toons of wonderful, skilled authors, every way you turn you'll find dozens of amazing authors, young and old, but... old school has such a taste that we "newbies" have lost. It's not to say one is better than the other, it's just two different styles, an old more poetic that was son of the century just ended and one newer more fitting to the 21st. I like both, but I admit that, for the original series and the Mirror Universe, the old one is perfect, while a more "immediate" and less "convoluted" way to write (and I mean the choice of words and the way to write sentences, not plots or what) fits perfectly for the new universe created by J.J.Abrams (an universe that perhaps you don't even like, but follow my rambling).

So, all these pages of silly wording (in a bad, very bad English) to say I love, love love this fanfiction. I'd re-read it immediately, but it's too late and I have no time, but... God, fucking loved it! And sorry for F word but I needed it! :D

 



Author's Response: It's great to hear that the story worked so well for you, especially since you're a MIrror fan (I don't think there are that many of us.) I've never believed the place could be as bad as usually written, mainly because of the reasons you give. That Kirk and Spock have managed to fit into the place they've found themselves in, but I also wanted for them to possess some of the attributes of "our" Kirk and Spock: loyalty, bravery, intelligence. I did find your comments about the different writing styles really interesting. Since I'm not a fan of the reboot universe (I didn't hate the movie but it didn't grab me, either,) I wasn't aware that there was such a difference. It makes sense, though, since, imo, the characters really aren't the same, so would be differently written. I'm inclined to describe TOS as more "romantic," in the older sense of the word, but I'm not sure that's quite right, either. Lastly, thanks so much for reading and for your lovely comments! (the longer the better!)

His Darkest Hour by jesmihr Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Spock must contend not only with his own feelings but also with those of a telepathic alien, who has designs on Kirk.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12994 Read Count: 18216
[Report This] Published: 09/10/2005 Updated: 09/10/2005
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/29/2010 Title: Chapter 1: His Darkest Hour

That's really wonderful fic. I'm at loss of words so, although I'd like to write more... I can't. :( Anyway... the wonderful scene of Jim deciding to go away at his own command is soo Jim: this scene probably will haunt my dreams!

Liar's Itch by jesmihr Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Kirk's day starts out poorly.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6362 Read Count: 10586
[Report This] Published: 09/10/2005 Updated: 09/10/2005
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/29/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Liar's Itch

Lovely! <3

Personal Effects by jesmihr Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Spock receives an unexpected gift.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11297 Read Count: 14789
[Report This] Published: 09/11/2005 Updated: 09/11/2005
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/29/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Personal Effects

I really loved the unique idea behind this one!

The Origin of Fire by jesmihr Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Summary: Spock relates an ancient Vulcan myth.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6366 Read Count: 6649
[Report This] Published: 09/11/2005 Updated: 09/11/2005
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/28/2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Origin of Fire

Well... I don't know where to start, one of the best story I've read.

Mimor Six by jesmihr Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Spock and another Vulcan are kidnapped while working on an important scientific project; Kirk risks everything to find them.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Non-consensual sex
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32108 Read Count: 27198
[Report This] Published: 09/12/2005 Updated: 09/12/2005
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/29/2010 Title: Chapter 4: Part IV

Amazing story, really!

The Bitter and the Sweet by jesmihr Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Spock tries to replace something that Jim has lost. (This story was written for the 2003 SAC, and was previously published there.)


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4472 Read Count: 9414
[Report This] Published: 10/18/2005 Updated: 10/18/2005
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/28/2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Bitter and the Sweet

It's really sweet and touching. <3

Cave Paintings by jesmihr Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Past Featured Story

This story takes place twelve days after "Amok Time."


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12722 Read Count: 34816
[Report This] Published: 10/18/2005 Updated: 10/18/2005
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/29/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Cave Paintings

Wow! I'm... speachless! **

Wounds that Bind by K Chaps Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

After Star Trek: The Motion Picture, Kirk and Spock struggle to make sense of the events and find a new path.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11658 Read Count: 4925
[Report This] Published: 08/16/2006 Updated: 08/16/2006
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Wounds that Bind

This story is... I can't really describe what makes me feel. At first I was screaming "nooo, these are not Jim and Spock", I sensed them too OOC so I had to separate themselves from the tv series (imagining them as similar to the Mirror's versions helped me). And then, going on... I've been truly captivated by the story and by every line.
I don't know if I'll ever change my mind over the OOCness with more readings but the story itself it more than fascinating.

As another reader said: I wish my own writing was as yours. *envious*

Just Fun by K Chaps Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Kirk gets caught and pays the price.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Dominance/submission
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2656 Read Count: 7032
[Report This] Published: 08/17/2006 Updated: 08/17/2006
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/18/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Just Fun

Oh my, this one totally killed me! And I'm totally quoting higlyillogical review!

Phoradendron Flavescens by K Chaps Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Kirk receives a gift.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1673 Read Count: 3553
[Report This] Published: 08/18/2006 Updated: 08/18/2006
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/18/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Phoradendron Flavescens

I really liked it. <3

Talk by K Chaps Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Kirk and Spock have a conversation.


Categories: Ficlets
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 551 Read Count: 5812
[Report This] Published: 08/21/2006 Updated: 08/21/2006
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Talk

This one is really wonderful, little and nice. Awwwr, I almost purred while reading! ^^"

Kirk Loves by K Chaps Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Some days are meant to lie abed.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 968 Read Count: 2954
[Report This] Published: 08/22/2006 Updated: 08/22/2006
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/18/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Kirk Loves

Really really lovely, the style was strange (only Spock speaking) and I needed a bit to adjust but... after a rereading I found the fic just perfect.

Time by K Chaps Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Kirk needs a lesson in time management.


Categories: Ficlets
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Dominance/submission
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 700 Read Count: 2596
[Report This] Published: 08/22/2006 Updated: 08/22/2006
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Time

Really lovely piece. <3

Come for Me by K Chaps Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Spock has his way with Kirk.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Dominance/submission
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1216 Read Count: 8974
[Report This] Published: 08/24/2006 Updated: 08/24/2006
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/19/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Come for Me

Oh my, this one made me droll madly!

Eyes Upon Me by K Chaps Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Spock has a personal problem, and a young Kirk is there.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1993 Read Count: 3607
[Report This] Published: 08/26/2006 Updated: 08/26/2006
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/18/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Eyes Upon Me

Really loved this one!

Truce and Consequences by K Chaps Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A diplomatic mission goes awry.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5349 Read Count: 7240
[Report This] Published: 01/19/2007 Updated: 01/19/2007
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstar
Date: 04/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: none

I really loved the characterization: as always, Spock and Kirk complete eachother as Captain and First Officer. <3

At Its Best by K Chaps Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Spock has a problem that none of them expected.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1610 Read Count: 6814
[Report This] Published: 01/19/2007 Updated: 01/19/2007
Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/19/2010 Title: Chapter 1: none

I realy love your Pon Farr fics. <3



Author's Response:

*grin* Thanks so much for ALL these lovely reviews.