Reviewer: UKJess Signed
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh very well done! An original premise, an original POV and original voice - funny and fully-realised - I really enjoyed this one.
There are a couple of places where the prose goes wonky - I couldn't work out what the Romulans have instead of Pon Farr - but that in no way affected my enjoyment of the story. If you need a beta: consider me volunteering, you can find my stuff in the archive too.
I am disappointed at the low number of reviews, but it's early days yet and I enjoyed it enough for half-a-hundred readers.Author's Response:
It's only been around for a day. So It's already getting more traffic then on my livejournal. Anyway. Give me an email, or a gtalk. I love IMing people. I have boatloads of crack in my hard drive. Here have a stupid video http://www.hulu.com/watch/154401/the-middle-duped