Reviewer: marrydiamond Signed
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is so good! When I first saw the summery I thought it would be a little silly. But it's great! (Although, I was a bit suprised that Spock would text in class) First, because you are just so realistic! For example when Spock has his first kiss with Jim, and he describes it as slimey and kind of awkward, that's exactly how I felt when I had my first little make out. (lol) And Spock's parents are funny. When they asked "how did studying go?" I was thinking Spock should say, "Fascinating, we had a very detailed study of the human anatomy." lol.
Second, it's interesting to see Spock experiencing the misery of teenage hormones (especially MALE human teenage hormones).
Poor Spock, I could see that coming. Jim is so mean. I hope it turns out well.
Sorry if the review was too long.
Keep writing!Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't think the review was too long at all; I like long reviews. :)
I'm glad you thought the first kiss was realistic... I kinda based it on the first time I ever made out with someone, lol. Actually, there are several things I've based on my own awkward teenage years, so maybe that's why it seems realistic.
The summary does make it sound a little silly, doesn't it? Maybe I should change it... I can't promise I'll manage to make it an improvement, though; I suck at summaries and titles!
Thanks for the review!