Penname: holmes221b [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 09/06/2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I like to ask "what if?" and then find out what happens next...I also tend to read a lot too. Currently a bit overwhelmed with school and other writing projects, so don't expect any new chapters to get posted until Decemberish.


Beta-reader: Yes
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Silver Lining by Amanda Warrington Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Spock is still in a relationship with Uhura when he experiences his first Pon Farr.  At his first officer's request, Kirk diverts the Enterprise to New Vulcan so he can marry T'Pring, who survived Vulcan's destruction.  However, when Spock gets there, he finds his wedding doesn't go according to plan.  This is Pon Farr with a reboot twist.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, McCoy, Original Character(s), Scott, Stonn, Sulu, T'Pring, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Erotica, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock, Pon Farr
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Silver Lining
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33312 Read Count: 56284
[Report This] Published: 10/11/2009 Updated: 10/11/2009
Reviewer: holmes221b Signed
Date: 02/25/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very well-done, well-written story, I quite enjoyed it.

~H221B

P.S. I feel like I really need to share a reaction I had to the following: How fortuitous it happened to be in line with his mouth.

My response was: Fortuitous, my ass.

Keep up the great writing!



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you enjoyed the story and thank you for sharing your reaction - it make me laugh!  :)

The Edge by Little Muse Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 104]
Summary: He knew the calm before a storm when he saw it. And one had been brewing for weeks now. Another pon farr fic.
Categories: Works in Progress, Fiction
Characters: Chapel, Chekov, McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Erotica, Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Infidelity
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64013 Read Count: 140139
[Report This] Published: 11/11/2009 Updated: 06/06/2013
Reviewer: holmes221b Signed
Date: 10/15/2010 Title: Chapter 2: Part II

Don't worry, you aren't the only one.
~Holmes

Summary:

After months of pining for his captain, Spock finally gets up the nerve to do something about it. Things don't exactly go according to plan, but when he unexpectedly finds out a few months later that Jim is pregnant, Spock convinces a resistant Jim (with a little help from the crew) that they were meant to be together.

Tapestry series.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chapel, Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Sarek, Scott, Sulu, T'Pring, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: ST:ENT, ST:TOS Original Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, First Time, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Hurt Kirk, Hurt Spock, Kolinahr, Pon Farr
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Preggers!Kirk
Series: Tapestry
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128511 Read Count: 654135
[Report This] Published: 08/15/2010 Updated: 05/11/2011
Reviewer: holmes221b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/24/2010 Title: Chapter 23: Many Meetings / The Second "Date"

Oh, that's just brilliant! Well done! I do hope that there will be more soon, I quite enjoy this story. ~EM

Author's Response:

I'm very happy that you like everything so far! *hugs*

I promise that I will do my very best to update regularly, and I hope that I will not disappoint you. :)

Reviewer: holmes221b Signed
Date: 10/09/2010 Title: Chapter 30: ...and Lies

The whole next chapter could be just of philosophy as long it results in McCoy causing a major diplomatic incident.
Anyways, keep up the awesome writing!

Author's Response:

Of course McCoy's going to stir up some trouble -- he's been lied to by people who "don't lie."

And it's going to give the Andorians a chance to recover from a lot of the flak that I've given them thus far. I haven't been very nice to them as a species, and so this is a way for me to say "sorry" to the Andorians by having an Andorian as a key component to setting things right again. Dr. Erib is going to be McCoy's ace in the hole to root out the truth.

Reviewer: holmes221b Signed
Date: 10/18/2010 Title: Chapter 31: Fever

Don't worry, the wait was totally worth it. Every single nanosecond of it.

Author's Response:

*grins* Whew -- that's a relief! I know how frustrating it can be when you have to wait and wait and wait for updates to a story that you're reading. They can never come fast enough, it seems.

Thanks for the reassurances.

Reviewer: holmes221b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/2011 Title: Chapter 35: Sexy Pants, Amazing Timing, and Fuzzy Boots

This chapter more than made up for the long wait (but only if you update a whole lot more frequently from now on, of course). <3 it!

~H



Author's Response:

I'm going to do my very best to do just that -- Girl Scout's promise. (And yes, I was once a Girl Scout, so that promise -almost- actually means something!)

;-)

Reviewer: holmes221b Signed
Date: 02/14/2011 Title: Chapter 37: Flower of Hope

Awww! That's adorable and awesome! I was totally thinking that Jim would somehow end up being the one to get to Spock, but T'svaistaya is way cuter!



Author's Response:

Yep, she's a miracle in every sense of the word. :)

Summary:

IDK who loaned Q a book about the holidays but he just can't leave these two alone.Written for verizonhorizon  who requested the porny “missing scene” drabble from the Matchmaker Matchmaker fic. 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: girl!Kirk, McCoy
Crossover Fandom: ST:TNG
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Established Relationship, Genderswap, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5533 Read Count: 4695
[Report This] Published: 12/12/2010 Updated: 12/12/2010
Reviewer: holmes221b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/21/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, no, you leave Bones alone, Q! Unless it's to turn the good doctor into a woman for a couple of days, then go right ahead.

Great story, I really enjoyed it.

~Holmes

Faciendum filia by Tlema Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 230]
Summary:

Now Complete!

A mission goes wrong on a planet of genius doctors who fixed up Captain J T Kirk before sending him back to his grateful friends... But it turns out they fixed him too well! When he and Spock get drugged and have a little fun, a baby is made! Can Spock convince Jim that their love is meant to be?

Written for Sage2134's challenge Preggers!Kirk:

Kirk and Spock have a one-night stand (Bottom!Kirk is feisty and Spock loves it.)
A couple months later Kirk finds out he's pregnant with Spock's baby. (mechanics don't matter, you can decide how or ignore the physiology entirely-i'm not picky)
He tells Spock and they get together, and Spock loves seeing Kirk all preggers and can't keep his hands off him.
Bonus points for pregnant sex.
Extra Super Bonus Points if there's some well-meaning ribbing from Bones and Uhura.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chapel, McCoy, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, First Time, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Abuse, Non-consensual sex
Challenges: Preggers!Kirk
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59461 Read Count: 457610
[Report This] Published: 01/05/2011 Updated: 02/08/2011
Reviewer: holmes221b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/03/2011 Title: Chapter 30: Back to the Grind

This will be interesting...My Kirk senses tell me that Winona Kirk's gonna be giving Jim and Spock a talking to next chapter (or so).

Reviewer: holmes221b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/05/2011 Title: Chapter 33: Doctors

Ooohh...let me guess, it's a court marshal. Against Spock and Kirk. In the dining room. Probably submitted by Komack, I'll bet.

~H

P.S. I totally want a cameo in this if I'm right...Well, not really--unless you want to.

Reviewer: holmes221b Signed
Date: 02/07/2011 Title: Chapter 38: Uhura's Plan and Frank's Rage

You haven't seen piling up until you've seen my series, 'Chocolate and Peanut Butter'...I'm already about a quarter of the way thru the third installment writing-wise, but I'm only about halfway thru posting the first installment.

 

Can Frank's vocal chords end up paralysed from Spock's attack? Pretty please?

(yeah, I'm kinda terrible, but I figure that it would be a bit too over the top to hope for karma to get him--but then again, there's always prison for that...)



Author's Response:

Aha, yeah, the only difference is mine has yet to be written. It's all miling around in my head and I have to put it into words. Oh the hardships of writing. XD

I think you'll be interested in my punishment for Frank. Lots of surprises.

Encroaching on Vulcan Territory by Tlema Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Vulcans don't like it when their territory is invaded.


Categories: Ficlets
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 515 Read Count: 8314
[Report This] Published: 01/20/2011 Updated: 01/20/2011
Reviewer: holmes221b Signed
Date: 04/01/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I picture Yeoman West as a blonde for some reason...

Very amusing ficlet.

Summary:

Now all done!!!!

For those of you who wanted a longer story, here you go. This will be on-going; I'll try to have a new chapter up every couple of days. For those of you who wanted me to do a pregnancy fic, here you go. And for those of you--like me--who are tired of Jim always being the one who gets knocked-up, this time Spock's the mama. Enjoy.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chapel, Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Spock's Baby Daddy
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97055 Read Count: 417131
[Report This] Published: 01/30/2011 Updated: 03/09/2011
Reviewer: holmes221b Signed
Date: 02/24/2011 Title: Chapter 23: Perhaps There Is No Safe Place

I bet he's allergic to that cream...poor Spock.



Author's Response:

Good guess, but nope. You'll have to come back and see....

Reviewer: holmes221b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/2011 Title: Chapter 34: Just When I Thought I was Out, They Drag Me Back In

I laughed out loud at Jim's glee at being McCoy's elder.

 

Keep it coming!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I suspect that's the only reason he agreed, lol.

Reviewer: holmes221b Signed
Date: 03/09/2011 Title: Chapter 36: Countdown to Operation Seahorse

Oh, does this mean that the mine collapses on Kirk and he ends up having to watch T'Lira's birth via a vidlink? 'Cause that would be absolutely awesome....



Author's Response:

Great idea, but no, that's not quite what happens. next chapter up now...

Reviewer: holmes221b Signed
Date: 03/09/2011 Title: Chapter 37: Wesley Crusher is Finally Useful

And then you went and posted another chapter while I was reviewing, lol. But the earthquake...just so awesome.

Reviewer: holmes221b Signed
Date: 03/10/2011 Title: Chapter 38: This Moment in Time

Oh gods, not only does T'Lira look like me, she has the same middle name as I do...

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

And here I'd been working under the assumption that you were a guy (the 'Holmes' moniker, lol).

Glad you liked it.

Vrekasht by Tlema Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 164]
Summary:

Jim moves to Vulcan with his mother, leaving behind his status as outcast on Earth to become the outcast on Vulcan. Little does he know, that position has already been filled.

Written for KrazieKat2009's Challenge" "And Teens Shall Be Teens".


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, Sarek, Stonn, T'Pring
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: Chan or underage sexuality
Challenges: And Teens Shall be Teens
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50782 Read Count: 208141
[Report This] Published: 02/25/2011 Updated: 05/10/2011
Reviewer: holmes221b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/01/2011 Title: Chapter 20: Reliving

"I wish to discuss Spock. My name is T'Pau."

I <3 this line to pieces!

Reviewer: holmes221b Signed
Date: 04/02/2011 Title: Chapter 22: How Many Ways Can You Die in a Shuttlecraft?

I think it's absolutely perfect!

Reviewer: holmes221b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/05/2011 Title: Chapter 25: Punishment... Mother Style

Oh no, Jim, look out! Skor's being used without his knowledge!

~H

P.S. "When we spock to your mother, she said Sarek wanted to talk to you and to go see him whenever you get a chance." Seriously, that has got to be one of the best typos EVER (the underlined bit)!