Penname: nixishadow [Contact] Real name: Elizabeth Ann
Member Since: 10/26/2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm a 25 year old female who lives in Colorado at the moment.  I've watched reruns of TOS for most of my life growing up, and find the idea that Spock and Kirk are together the only cannon pairing that has no chance of changing.


At some point I'll try to get some of my work posted here, as soon as I find a good Beta.  I have a ton of ideas and will be posting more challenges as soon as possible.  Please have fun with my challenges, ans maybe I'll actually get around to writng responses to them.


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Reviews by nixishadow
Till It Be Morrow by Ray Newton Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

The first pon farr. Part of a zine tracing the developing relationship between Kirk and Spock.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8366 Read Count: 21937
[Report This] Published: 04/27/2006 Updated: 04/27/2006
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed
Date: 03/28/2012 Title: Chapter 1: One

I love this explination of Pon Farr.  Dispelling the fear by explaining that selective breeding made it imperative that the male must become desperate and agressive in order to mate.

Fantastic tale, the bays are so worried, but stay in character throughout.  I appreciate how even Sarek was concerned that Kirk wouldn't be able to submit entirely, but of course he needn't have worried- we all know Kirk is always hungry for Spock. ;)

Overdone by Annenburg Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Based on prompt (Spock finds out he's pregnant and is totally nonchalant about it). So, uh, mpreg? Also, this is a sequel to "Thorough", but it can stand on its own.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3356 Read Count: 15749
[Report This] Published: 07/31/2009 Updated: 07/31/2009
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/05/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

“Rest assured, I am not ill. Merely pregnant.”
 
^^^^^^^^^^^

I love it!  So funny.  I can totally see Spock thinking that him being pregnant and giving birth in less than 20 weeks as completely normal and find it unnecessary to tell anyone about it.  Poor temporarily hurt, increasingly aroused Jim- doesn't quite know what to make of the whole deal.

Incidentally by Annenburg Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Another meme fic! Would you look at that. Jim wakes up with girl parts, freaks out, and runs to Spock. Spock takes the opportunity to sex him up a bit. The two of them are emotionally retarded for a few long paragraphs, and then complications ensue. Oh, hey, go figure; I wrote something where a guy knocked up another guy. I NEVER do that. Lol.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Genderswap, Hurt/Comfort, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5288 Read Count: 13957
[Report This] Published: 08/10/2009 Updated: 08/10/2009
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this version of Spock- totally in love with his very make Captain and so desperate to keep it all hidden- until Kirk show up at his door in a female body.  Absolutely awsome characterizations and I can totally see Kirk waking up with breats and no cock and thinking that the first person he has to see about this change is Spock- and of course he has to experiment with his new and totally awsome parts.  Fantastic.

Debt of Honor by Brianna Falken Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 66]
Summary:

TOS A/U novella. Six months after being taken prisoner and raped by a Vulcan captain, Kirk finds that same Vulcan is now being assigned as his first officer when peace between Vulcan and Earth is declared. Originally published in the print fanzine Beyond Dreams 7 (2004), edited by Jenna Sinclair.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: AU or Mirror Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33255 Read Count: 109405
[Report This] Published: 09/14/2009 Updated: 09/14/2009
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed
Date: 03/10/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful.  You combined these characters lives in the most perfect way.  Thank you for this fic.



Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely comments. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this story. Brianna.

A Beautiful(ly Illogical) Mind by waldorph Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary: Jim never takes up Pike's dare to do better.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, Chapel, Chekov, Chris Pike, Gaila, McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash, Polyamorous
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Character Study, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43143 Read Count: 111367
[Report This] Published: 10/04/2009 Updated: 10/05/2009
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Family Matters

I swear, this is like the sixth time I've read this, and I have yet to write a review, so I'll do so now.

I have to say, I love this fic.  It's amazingly detailed, funny, tender, loving, angsty, sad, depressing, joyful, at times and just fantastic everywhere.  I can't get over how clearly you present your characters.  They all fall into place exactly where and how they need to.  Each part flows perfectly, each part covers another aspect of the Kirk/Spock expirience, each aspect details something that brings another piece of the whole out.  I have placed this piece on my all time favorites list beacuse it's just amazing how well everything flows.

Thanks for getting inspired by the challenge, I'd love to see more of your writing.

Antithesis by Annenburg Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Kirk is given an assignment he isn't sure he'll ever be able to finish. "What would you have done differently in the situation on Tarsus IV?"  His childhood nightmare double-spaced in twelve-point font.

(Written for kinkmeme prompt, during academy days)


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5396 Read Count: 14811
[Report This] Published: 11/01/2009 Updated: 11/01/2009
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love your Kirk- I imagine that this is exactly how he would deal with his emotions and experiences on Tarsus IV when in a course that is trying to use Kudos in this manner.  Your Spock is very believable in his actions and reactions when dealing with an uncommunicative Kirk after being pursued in this manner.

I almost want to see how this beginning would change how these two react once their both on the Enterprise- If you ever get a plot bunny to continue this.  Thanks so much, you did a wonderful job of bringing these two characters to life.

Winter Sun by Rhaegal Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Shore leave happens to coincide with Christmas. Jim convinces Spock to join him for some traditional Terran festivities, and learns an unexpected lesson in Vulcan customs.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10284 Read Count: 9438
[Report This] Published: 01/07/2010 Updated: 01/08/2010
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed
Date: 01/11/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Winter Sun

Beautiful story.  I love imagining Spock in a snowy environment.

Great characterizations of both Spock and Kirk.  Thanks for this fic.

Corrections by Annenburg Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Virgin!Spock tries sleeping with Jim. Things don't proceed as hoped. Thankfully, Jim's pretty good at turning things around.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2325 Read Count: 11679
[Report This] Published: 01/22/2010 Updated: 01/22/2010
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/05/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it!  So hot and the perfect insecure Spock and a great confident and in love Kirk.  You did a wonderful job of showing us how true first time sex can be and how a confident and experienced partner can make it a fantastic experience.  I almost want to see an extension or epiloge on how these two are doing in the future.

Vulcans Are Fangirls Too by skellig8 Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Captain Kirk publishes under a psuedonym and Spock sends some fanmail. Shenanigans ensue.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chris Pike
Crossover Fandom: ST:XI Abrams Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Kink
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10649 Read Count: 6022
[Report This] Published: 04/06/2010 Updated: 04/06/2010
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/01/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Vulcans Are Fangirls Too

I love your GeniusKirk- because we all know that his escapes are not entirely up to good luck.  Your Spock is fantastically in character and I just love how cute he is with his letters from his hero.

Great job- wonderfully paced and a good all 'round read. Thanks for sharing your talents with all of us.

All Our Tomorrows by kyliselle Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Takes place immediately following the episode All Our Yesterdays. After the events on Sarpeidon, Kirk is avoiding Spock. Spock isn't having it.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1695 Read Count: 17353
[Report This] Published: 09/27/2010 Updated: 09/28/2010
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed
Date: 03/10/2011 Title: Chapter 1: All Our Tomorrows

Love it!  Spock gets directly to the point and clears thing up.  Wonderful.

Blue Suede Shoes by surrenderdammit Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: AU/AR. It was perfectly logical. And so Spock goes looking for the perfect donor.(Warning; Mentions of test tube babies and questionable technology, sperm donating awkwardness.)
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time, Hurt/Comfort, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1272 Read Count: 5254
[Report This] Published: 10/08/2010 Updated: 10/08/2010
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/04/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic begining.  I'd love to see more of what you have planned for these two.  Keep working on it and I'll be sure review when I see mroe.

Call Me Brother by Deanna Gray Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Based on the TOS episode "Whom Gods Destroy".  When Kirk tells Garth that Spock is his brother, he has no idea the connotations of that word when it comes to Vulcans.  But he's about to find out.

Originally published in "Beyond Dreams" 1


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9205 Read Count: 12918
[Report This] Published: 10/11/2010 Updated: 10/11/2010
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/05/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love how you brought these two together.  The use and precision of words was a wonderful way to get Spock and Kirk to join.  You have such a way with your descriptions- your sex scene was beautiful, gentle and passionate.  Thanks for sharing you talent- I appreciate it immensely.

Uncomfortably Rumpled by rae1013 Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

"Zee Keptin has a laundry fetish."


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3663 Read Count: 4800
[Report This] Published: 11/17/2010 Updated: 11/17/2010
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Complete Story

How awesome- I can relate completely with wanting, needing straightened, flat, not bunched up sheets when I sleep.  It's driven bedmates nuts when I get up and straighten things before actually relaxing into the bed.

Love this story, especially the beginning on how the topic came up at the "weekly ritual, known as Texas Hold 'Em, was performed with alcohol, banter, and doses of 'too much information'," Love it!.

Ooh La La by rae1013 Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Did you know that Vulcans ran underground 'touch' clubs? Well, now you do.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3150 Read Count: 3534
[Report This] Published: 11/28/2010 Updated: 11/28/2010
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Complete Story

So amazingly hot.  Volcan touch clubs- so fascinating.  I can see how Spock would have gotten used to having Kirk around to touch and feel whenever either desired, and being suddenly without touch but still seeing the other every day would have made both of our boys frustrated and horny.

Thanks for sharing.

Summary:

Kirk really needs to be more careful at diplomatic banquets.

I don't know where this story came from; the first line flew into my brain, and the next thing I knew, I was up at the keyboard at 1 a.m. This is my first threesome (tee, hee), so I hope you enjoy it. Anyone who needs a shower afterwards may send their water bill to me.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Polyamorous
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3331 Read Count: 14434
[Report This] Published: 11/29/2010 Updated: 11/29/2010
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Amazingly well done.  I love Bones when he gets his goat up- repeating that he's no gay while getting turned on at watching Kirk and Spock go at it. I dearly love your Spock- logical and horny and gentle and highly attracted to the golden human, Kirk.  Very well done.

A Second Chance by Ayesakara Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

An incident during a shore leave gone disastrous leaves Spock with a link he never expected with his captain—a bond he needs but which he suspects Jim never wanted. The consequences of how he deals with that ‘belief’ change everything for them.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, First Time, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Kirk, Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44936 Read Count: 57875
[Report This] Published: 12/13/2010 Updated: 12/13/2010
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/31/2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor boys- so insecure in the other's affections.  I think you did a remarkable job of bringing Spock and Kirk to life and in having them come to terms with the bond and the change in their relationship.

Love you characterization of all of your characters: McCoy, Uhura, Kirk and Spock in particular.  Wonderfully done.  Thanks for sharing your talents with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the plot and the characterizations. I appreciate your comments very much! :)

Spock's Passion by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

This is in response to Tlema's "comfort" challenge, which goes like this:

Spock walks in on Uhura and Scotty (kissing or more, it's up to you!). He finds himself trying to figure out if he even cares or not. In the post-breakup stage, a certain captain is there to comfort his Vulcan First Officer. Abrams Universe.

Bonus

 - If Spock cries and Kirk finds him

   - Bones tries to offer realtionship advice (I don't care who he gives it to!)

Your wish (complete with bonus elements) is my command. Enjoy.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Scott, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Comfort
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2199 Read Count: 13629
[Report This] Published: 12/14/2010 Updated: 12/14/2010
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed
Date: 01/11/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ugh, I love this.  Pure, passionate smut.

So hot! I love seeing this side of Spock- and of course it would only come out with Kirk.



Author's Response:

Yes, only Kirk gets to see the sad, lonely Vulan--which is why Spock loves him, of course.

Thanks.

Summary:

Spock's a sneaky Vulcan. He takes advantage of his captain's being human to steal little vulcan kisses here and there. Little does he know, his captain's not as dumb as he looks. Pure, unabashed sex at the end.

Written in response to nixishadow's challenge 'Courting and Hands':

I have read many stories where Captain Kirk is oblivious to the whole Vulcan's use their hands-to-kiss.  Where either Kirk is touching Spock and Spock lets him, or where Spock touches Kirk and Kirk doesn't know that they are kissing.

I want a story (one-shot or Multi-chapter) where Kirk 'knows' about Vulcan phisiology and 'knows' that Vulcans' hands are uber-sensitive and are used to kiss.

I would prefer:

Kirk having knowledge of Vulcan culture, language, and history and being very intelligent overall.  (For whatever reason- but I like to think he learns all the Vulcan stuff because he has to work with Spock and becomes fascinated with it all.)

Spock courting Kirk (ie. touching his hands, either- hoping Kirk knows and will take the hint- or thinking he is being sneaky about it- stealing kisses on the sly).

After Spock initiates the kisses or courtship (whichever way you want it to go), Kirk expresses confusion or frustration because Spock wouldn't just come out and 'speak'.

-Maybe a Spock who thinks he's being sneaky (not wanting to get rejected?) and doen;t realise that Kirk does-in-fact-know...

 

I would like to see some hot smex- but I like a strong relationship fic as much as anyone.  If you want it to be a three-or-more-some, go for it!

At least one Chess match between our boys- we can't miss out on their games.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Courting and Hands
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2802 Read Count: 43316
[Report This] Published: 12/19/2010 Updated: 12/19/2010
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed
Date: 01/10/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A fantastic response to this challenge.  I'm so glad you took the time to respond.

Wonderful writing, I loved you 'sneaky' Spock and 'informed' Kirk, an great fic.  Thanks so much!

From the Beginning by Aelin Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

Spock is drawn to Kirk from the first time he sees him at the Academy


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29413 Read Count: 53467
[Report This] Published: 12/31/2010 Updated: 01/16/2011
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love your insecure, confused, and so young Spock.  He simply comes to life with your words.  I have to say, the twleve years is a long time to think that you have sexually assaulted someone (for both of our boys)- so I would have wished for an earlier understanding between them, but I do like how you had this Kirk, and this Spock learn how to trust eachother again and become friends.  Thanks for sharing your talent.

Untitled by Often Adamanta Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Written for kink meme prompt: Spock has sensitive fingers. Kirk has a sensitive prostate. Spock accidentally makes both of them come early just from fingering Kirk's ass.


Categories: Ficlets
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 457 Read Count: 4190
[Report This] Published: 01/23/2011 Updated: 01/23/2011
Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/02/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Next time I'm preparing myself," Jim mutters when his breathing has almost returned to a normal rate. "You can't be trusted."
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

I love this.  I am amazed at how hot you made this ficlet.  Absolutely wonderful.  Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us readers.