Reviewer: Alice Nox Signed
Chapter 1: “Wer geteilt, ist, hat, nicht, mitzuteilen”- Bargeld
Urm...Hello. I believe that a comment was left on this story by my account when it was under the name EMOGIRL. I would simply like to say I apologize. I am dearly sorry. It seems that when I left my account open while reading this someone I thought was a friend and could be trusted logged onto my computer and saw what i was reading and decided they would take the "liberty" of commenting for me. After reviewing what was left on this I feel just horrible. Nobody should be left a review like that.
I hope that you can forgive such a comment. I dearly wish that I had judged my "friends" better. I hope that perhaps I can make up for it by writing a review in MY OWN WORDS. :)
My review: This story had many compiling elements! And the development was quite interesting. And the end was absolutely stunning leaving the reader with a almost echoing feeling of how the characters felt. I hope to see your talent develop in extraordinary ways in the future! I see Great talent in the ruff here! Keep it going! :DAuthor's Response:
1) It is compelling, not compiling.
2) It is rough, not ruff.
3) I don't believe you. Your apology lacks sincerity and you follow it up with the most patronising review I've ever received. Talent in the rough? Really? Out of morbid interest I looked at your own fic; your averages-two-stars fic. Your grammatically miserable gobbledygook scrabble of words that adds up to no syntax that I recognise. You don't get to patronise me. I am a snob. I am full of myself. But I'm also an autistic genius that gets really snippy when challenged by a mental midget that is too stupid to recognize Danger! Danger! Will Robinson.
4) No, I'm not very nice when someone is nasty to me, gets grief over it, then tries to justify their behavior with the perfect panacea of Oh-no-someone-hacked-me. Take your feeble text-speak idiocy elsewhere.